写了篇文章，大侠帮我看看有没有语法错误？
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My mother wish that I lose weight.
But I don't like do that.
I don't worry that too much pressures may be bring more prices.
try to study hard
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When I looked at the sky,I felt the clouds are so dark and I thought they were crying sadly.I really want you to tell me something extractly.
You used to say‘We will be the best friends forever.'I don't know whether you've forgotten it.
文章结构层次都还可以。
注意一些单词的用法，比较中国式，已作修改
还有些时态错误。也改过来了。
本来是想多换一点血的，但是想想既然是你的真情实感，就不应该让它流失。
遣词造句还是要修炼一下啊，多背背文章吧。
错儿多了。
The day when I saw you went out with her,I knew that you lied.I felt angry at that time but kept silence because I thought you had your excuses.I thought I was your best friends who could understand you.But I failed in understanding your feelings.You lied to me again.It was the worst day for me since this term began.When I knew that you lied to me again,I had nothing to say.I thought‘friends' means politeness,help,honesty and so on.I couldn`t take the nerve to ask what had happened in these days.You have made me feel painful.I didn`t understand why she could take my place?
When I looked at the sky,the clouds are so dark,as if they were crying sadly.I really wanted to know everything extractly.
You used to say,"We will be the best friends forever."While I still keep it in my heart,have you forgotten?
我改了些语法错误，换了些不礼貌的表达方式，希望你满意。
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