帮我看看我自己翻译的几个句子有什么不妥当的地方 高分请各位高手留下自己的整首歌的歌词翻译，我翻译得不妥当的地...
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3. 这个小男孩独自一人时往往挨饿，因为他不会做饭
The little boy is always famished when he is alone, because he can't cook by himself.
4. 看到老人奄奄一息，邻居们一刻也没有耽误，马上请来医生。
The neirbourghs called for the doctors in time when seeing the old who is at his last gasp.(who is serious ill).
6. 穿这件衣服看起来很合身，好像是专门为你做的一样。
The coat is very suitable for you, it seems that it is just made for you.
7. 创造的愿望是很重要的。如果我们只是模仿，那就很难发展新事物了。
Creation is very important. It will be difficult to develop on the way of imitation if we just imitate.
9. 我认为世上没有比母亲更伟大的人了
I think that no one in the world is greater than mothers.
12. 我绝不怀疑如果我遇上麻烦，比尔会帮助。
It is doubt that Bill will give me a hand when I get in troubles.
13. 我将永远把北京看作为我的第二故乡。
I will regard Beijing as my second hometown forever.
15. 我很快就认识到，我的生活现在就取决于我了。如果我要在学业上取得成功，我就必须制定一份学习计划。
Soon I recognized that my life lies on my own. If i want to succeed in my school work, I must make a learning scheme.
1.This letter, I know, is long past due. I know you’ll forgive the tardiness, you always do.
我熟悉这信，它是已经过期的了。我知道你就慢慢原谅缓慢的，你总是这样。
2. In any case, I smiled. In that instant, it was as though a spark jump across the gap between our two hearts.
在任何情况下，我会微笑。在那一时刻，就好像是有一束火花从两心之间的缝隙之中跳了出来。（两颗心之间就产生了火花）
8. I dream only that someday --- perhaps as a senior --- I will be able to win a race with as big as the one I got when I lost that race as a freshman.
我梦想有一天——也许作为高年级生——我将可以和像我一样大的人一起比赛并且取得胜利，而输了比赛的话我就是一个低年级生。
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