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首先，父母更先进的比年轻的成年人。他们更有可能已经适应了社会的规则。换句话说，他们可以提供宝贵的意见和他们的孩子时，满足某些种类的困难。这些建议来自许多年的经验，这些年轻的成年人没有自己。
此外，年轻的原因，生活除了他们的父母是想逃避父母的控制。但再想一想，为什么他们要控制自己亲爱的孩子？答案是他们热爱自己的孩子，就这么简单。他们不希望自己的孩子去了错误的方式，面对挫折早龄。不会给你的指示，你的孩子当他们正处于一个关键时刻，如选择的大学，甚至结婚？你有何感想，如果你的孩子拒绝您的建议，只是想你想控制自己的生活？
这些事实来自几代人之间的误解。每个人都认为不同，更不用说不同的后代。家长认为自己的孩子叛逆，而青年认为他们的父母老式。他们都没有站在对方的观点。但是，通信只是介乎尊重对方。如果他们可以想像自己是对方，思想更加对方，代沟可能会消失。从某种程度上来说，这是爱，导致这样一个问题。和爱可以解决这个问题的另一种途径。
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