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I am the applicant xx. I desire to major in architecture at xx.From September 2008 to July 2011, I studied at xx. After the college entrance examination, I considered a lot about my dream and future.I love the architecture deeply on account of it blending painting and math together, both of which I enjoy so much. I have visited the World Expo (Shanghai) for three times and I was attracted by the each building that has a distinguishing feature. I think they are the lost part of the buildings in China. As far as I am concerned, the spirits in the architectures can reflect a time’s culture. Alvar Aalto is my adoring architect. The details such as eliminating the noise from the faucet, painting the ground with warm color show the core of architecture—people. I want to be a architect like him and I am dying to be a architect who can bring happiness to the others.
The open atmosphere, advanced equipments as well as knowledgeable professors at xx attract me greatly. I'm looking forwarfd to being a student of your school so much!
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我是申请人xx。我想学习建筑在xx。从2008年9月至2011年7月,我就读于xx。在大学入学考试,我想我的很多梦想和未来。
我喜欢绘画和数学。和我喜欢的建筑相融合在一起。我去过世界博览会(上海)为三次,而我被吸引的建筑物,每一个都有特色,我认为是失去了在中国的建筑。就我而言,精神可以反映一个时代的建筑文化。阿尔瓦·阿尔托是深爱着我的建筑师。细节如消除噪声的水龙头,画的地面用暖色的显示architecture-people的核心。我想成为一个建筑师喜欢他,我想成为一个建筑师谁能使其它的幸福。
开放的气氛,先进的生产设备、知识渊博的教授在xx吸引深深打动了我。我想成为一名学生在学校非常! 去百度在线翻译可以解决！
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