自己写了一句英文怕有错误，请大神帮我看看有问题没？ 我写了一句一句英语句子，请大家帮忙看看有没有问题，哪里有问题...
\u81ea\u5df1\u5199\u7684\u82f1\u8bed\u53e5\u5b50,\u6765\u770b\u770b\u6709\u6ca1\u6709\u9519\u8bef1. I really appriciate your help.\u66f4\u597d\uff0c\u7b80\u7ec3
2. \u5982\u679c\u662f\u5728\u8bb2\u6545\u4e8b\uff0c\u4e00\u822c\u7528He got ready to run.\u6216\u8005He's ready to run.
3. \u5bf9\uff0c\u4e0d\u8fc7\u6700\u597d\u6539\u6210 I am considering not going with him.\u56e0\u4e3a\u4e00\u822ctake \u8c01\uff0c\u53ef\u80fd\u8fd9\u4e2a'\u4ed6'\u662f\u4e2a\u5c0f\u5b69\uff0c\u6216\u8ddf\u73ed\u4e4b\u7c7b\u7684\u3002
4. so did I \u6539\u4e3a I did \u3002\u5012\u88c5\u53e5\u91cc\u5582\u8bed\u52a8\u8bcd\u4e00\u4e2a\u5012\u88c5\u5c31\u53ef\u4ee5\u4e86\u3002
\u5199\u6210He and I got home almost at the same time.\u4e0d\u662f\u66f4\u6e05\u695a\u5417\uff1f
\u4f60\u597d\uff0c\u4f60\u8fd9\u53e5\u8bdd\u662f\u6709\u70b9\u8bed\u6cd5\u9519\u8bef\u7684\uff0c\u4e00\u4e2a\u53e5\u5b50\u91cc\u5fc5\u987b\u8981\u6709\u4e3b\u8c13\u5bbe\uff0c\u4f60\u8fd9\u53e5\u8bdd\u7f3a\u5c11\u8c13\u8bed\uff0cbeing\u4e0d\u662f\u8c13\u8bed\uff0c\u6539\u6210are being\u3002
您好，看了您的句子，不确定你想要表达的是汉语的（7折）还是英语的（7折）。因为汉语和英语是相反的。您写了 70% off，汉语就是（3折）了，也就是100元的东西，您卖30元的意思。语法错误：
1）70% discount = 3折，表示只需要支付30%的价钱；不确定这个是否是您想要表达的折扣？
2）on your next order，不是 for your next order
3）Please comment and share our products on Facebook if you like our porducts.（这里改成 our products 比较恰当；然后使用一个全新独立的句子，而不是用逗号，接着前面的句子继续。
4）Welcome to you next time! 这一句话语法不多。我想您想要表达的是（欢迎您下次光临）。可以使用：We welcome your next visit!
所以个人会改成：
You can get a 30% discount by using the code KNVIP30 on your next order. Please comment and share our products on Facebook if you like them. We welcome your next visit!
Welcome to you next time! 你这是想表达啥？是想说欢迎下次再来订购吧？
你这70% discount 是指我们中文里面的3折了。 这么便宜的 吗？ 你想表达打7折就要30% off. 你可以说 discount at 30% off.
You can get discount at 30% off by using the code KNVIP30 for your next order. Please comment and share out posts on Facebook if you like our products. Welcome your next order.
You can get a 70% discount with the code KNVIP30 on your next order
改了点更简洁一点
Welcome to you next time
这句我不明白是想表达什么
能先用中文写出你想说的吗？
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