英语修改短文
\u5e2e\u5fd9\u4fee\u6539\u4e2a\u82f1\u6587\u4f5c\u6587Dear Jimmy,
We feel so terrible when we heard you were sick. Your energy, power, broad-minded qualities are keep rising before my eyes, and I cannot believe this has happened just after 5 months I have seen you. I lose my mind as if I am dreaming.
There is no need to say you are a great teacher. You taught us to do things in a proper way and boost our confidence. You guided us forward when we lost our directions. We are pride to be a member of the team.We will keep going to spread your value, your mind, and we will always be loyal to you.
We will bless you; hope the god will help you. We are looking forward to your healing and hearing to your voice again.
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Devoted all their loves,energies and hopes in their lives to us.
It is not only equired by our laws
some evil phenomena
abnormal phenomena
p.s. i think you can use\u201c such as\u201d to replace \u201cincluding\u201d, because when i study in USA, they prefer to phrase\uff5e\uff5e
历史的天空仍然艳阳高照,历史的长河依然奔流不息.
正如老子所说：“万物并作,吾以观复”.
无论生死得失,都无须悲戚哀绝,不必有悔意、
不必有牵恋.这样才可远离红尘喧嚣,求得心灵平静.
叔本华说：“你想拥有的越多,你就越痛苦”；
郑板桥说,人生贵在“难得糊涂”.
雾里看花花曼妙,水中望月月朦胧.
人生就是一段“放下”的旅程!年少时我们需要放下贪欲和复杂；
中年时我们需要放下名利和挣扎；老年时我们需要放下悔意和浮华.
一切随风,如剔透的水晶红尘终化.
学会放下,活在当下!
象庄子一样,泛起不系之舟,饱食而遨游天下!
生命,方如一朵永不凋谢的花!
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