这是我写的英语作文，标记的地方有语法错误，求高手修改一下。。。谢谢 帮忙修改英语作文，语法有什么错误，谢谢
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Walking in the street, I suddenly saw a familiar figure --- Jason, the \u201cking\u201d in my primary school! My memory of childhood was blurry all the time but when I saw his face ,he recalled all the past to me.
Jason was a typical school bully in our primary school. Fights were the normal things for him. I was his deskmate and we were good friends in fact.He looked like didn't care about anything and I bet that he never had a complete class.I have not seen him after graduating from the primary school.
I said hello to him, \u201c How are you recently?\u201d
Jason looked at me as if i asked something embarrassing and an unknown emotion flashed from his eyes, \u201cHi, it\u2019s been a long time.\u201d
\u201cYou must have had a good time now.\u201d I said, \u201c You are so bright in our perimary school .I remember those things all the time.\u201d
Jason said, \u201cNo, in fact, I quited from school and work in a restaurant for a long time.
I suddenly realized that maybe my primary school cl assmate did not live as good as I imagined. His clothes was shabby and his face was also older than ours.
\u201cWhy you leave school?\u201d I asked.
\u201cOh, it is a long story.\u201d Jason said, \u201cSometime I admire you to have such a responsible parents who concerned of you.\u201d
\u201cHow can you think so!\u201d I was really surprised, \u201c You can\u2019t imagine how noisy they are! They try to keep you studying all the time and give you tasks endless.
\u201cShut up!\u201d he roared at me and drove mad and i heard the hard,sharp thrusts of his breath. We were in silence for a while and he stared at me in a nearly sympathetic sight. \u201cYou don't know what you have and how happy you are now! If my parents had educated me anything or just care about me , I wouldn't be what I am now!\u201d
Suddenly it was like a hand touching my heart, I realized that parents\u2019 care and control was so rare that could lead me to the correct road. It was like the scissor pruned the askew branches. Maybe it would difficult to obey but it could help you grow up .
\u201cThank you.\u201d I said to Jason sincerely,for his roar and mention.
I turned back and ran home.I knew I must open that close door.
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In the morning, I went to a restaurant. I have known theplace for a long time and what happened in the morning is really impressive.
I had a good time in the restaurant but I left my pursethere. How upset I was! The wallet which I bought from the market costs nearly5 thousands Yuan, and I am sure that such an expensive purse will lost forsure, but I still went back to the restaurant again and tried to find it.
It was 9:30 when I went into the restaurant. I wanted tofind my purse eagerly. After a while, the waiter came. He passed me the purseand I thanked him a lot.
Since then, I realized that those people who offer me helpare kind people. I will always remember this unforgettable experience.
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