给美国寄宿家庭的信。帮忙看看，语法，单词什么的。看看有没有什么忌讳。谢谢。
帮你改一下：Dear Browns:
Hello! This is ERIC. Do you remember me? Christmas Day is imminent. I want to wish you a Merry Christmas through this email.
Actually, I wanted to write you a letter by mail, but I had this decision too late. I was afraid you can't receive it on Christmas Day.
How are you doing these years? Is everything OK? I still remember the days living with you, and i really enjoy those times. It was wonderful. My oral communication wasn't very skilled at that time, so i couldn't express my feelings well.
The salad you gave me is delicious. My family enjoyed it very much. We mixed it with Chinese food and it tastes even better.
How are you, Jacob? Are you busy with your job? I fall in love with guitar after listening to your play. I learned to play it after I came back to China. I hope that we can play it together someday. I still remember how to play the song you taught me on piano. I want to know the name of that song. Can you please tell me? I Wish you happiness everyday!
How are you, Caleb? Are you busy with your study? What are you interests now? It was nice to stay at your room, and play games with you. One of mine unforgetable memory was that we listened to classical music throughout the night, I knew it wasted a lot of electricity. But, it was the most wonderful experience I had in America. When I woke up in the music, I felt very relax with the fainted scenery outside my window. I can still remember a melody in one of the CDs, but I don't know which song it was. I do want to listen it again. If there aren't too many songs in the CDs, can you please write me the names of all the songs? Then, I will listen to them one by one. If there are too many songs, can you please write me some names that may be possible (I'm not sure if I ever told you about the song I liked very much) Please try your best to help me reviewing my memory. I will appreciate your help. I have passed the game <The legend of ZELDA:Spirit Tracks> on Nintendo DS. It's a perfect work, just as what you have told me. Last but not least, I wish you to have a good vacation!
Hola！Kimberly. I'm ERIC,tu hermano. How are you? Have you graduated? It seemed like you were very busy everyday. I have learned a lot of Spanish from you.
Hola = hello
Bueno = good
Como Estas = How are you?
Thank you for being my most lively "teacher", oh, you always play tricks on me. Merry Christmas!
It was difficult for me to write this letter. There may have some mistakes in the letter. I hope you can understand it.
THANKS FOR TAKING CARE OF ME! I MISS YOU ALL THE TIME!
YOURS
ERIC
Dear Mr. and Mrs. Browns
Hello!I am ERIC,do you still remember me? Chrismas' day is coming so, I write this e-mail to wish you a marry chrismas.
Actually,I want to write a letter to you,but it's too late when i decided.i was afraid you couldn't receive it on Chrismas'day.
How are you these years?is everything OK?i still remember the days with you and i really enjoy the time,it was wonderful.My speaking skill was bir very good at that time so i could not express my felling well.
The salad you gave me was delicious,my family enjoyed it very much.We mixed it with chinese food.it tasted even better.
How are you Jacob? Are you busy with your job?i fall in love with guitar after listen to you play it.i have been learning it since i came back to China.i hope that we can play guitars together one day. i can still play the song you taught me on piano,i want to know the name of the song.Plase tell me. Wish you happy everyday!
How are you Caleb?Are you busy studying?What are you interested in now?it's nice to stay at your room,and play games with you.An unforgetable thing is that we listen to classical music during the night,i know it waste a lot of electricity.But it's the most wonderful thing i experienced in America.When i woke up in the music i feel so relax.And the scenery outside the window is also fainted.i can still remember a melody in one of the CDs.But,i don't know which song it is,and i do want to listen it again.If there are not many songs in the CDs,Plase write the names of all the songs,and i will listen to them one by one.If there are too many songs in it.Plase write some names which are possible(i'm not sure if i had told you a song which i like it very much)Plase try your best to help me reviewing the memory.i will be very grateful to you.i have pass the game <The legend of ZELDA:Spirit Tracks>on Nintendo DS,it's a perfect work as you told me.At last,wish you have a good vacation!
Hola！Kimberly.I'm ERIC,tu hermano.How are you?Have you gradulated?it appears that you are very busy everyday.i learned lots of Spanish from you.
Hola = hello
Bueno = good
Como Estas = How are you?
Thank you for being the most lively "teacher",oh,you always play tricks on me.Marry Chrismas!
It's difficult for me to write this letter,there is may be some mistake in the letter,i hope you can understand it.
THANKS FOR LOOKING AFTER ME,I MISS YOU EVERYTIME!
YOURS
ERIC
Hello!I am ERIC,do you still remember me? Chrismas'day is coming,so I write this e-mail to wish you marry chrismas.
It should be "Merry Christmas" or "Merry Chrismas". Not the marry.
I'll miss you all the time.
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