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Recently, I found that I really grow up. In the past, I am very short and very thin, now, I already very tall, also had put on some weight, my long hair has been cut very refreshing. In the past, I am shy, often can not answer the teacher's questions, after several years, I have dared to speak, I am full of confidence, and, I make friends withmany people, I feel very happy. In addition, I used to like to go out to play, now I still like to stay at home and listen to music to relax yourself. With these changes, my learning has made great progress. I am very substantial now 。
Do you want to know me ?If your answer is yes ,I will tell you about myself .Maybe 3 years ago ,I was a
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