英语作文my dream weekend如果用了一般现在时扣几分》（满分15分）快啊，急得不得了
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My weekend
Yesterday was Sunday,and it was my 12years birthday. My parents had a birthday party at home. I invited my friends to come to the party. At the party. They gave me many small presents. They sang Happy Birthday to me. My mother made a big cake for me.We really had a good time at the weekend.
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My Weekend
It is weekend. I am excited, It\u2019s not because of weekend but \u201cThe Smurfs\u201d, a 3D movie published by Sony Pictures Releasing (Argentina). After I have my lunch, I go to the Red Star cinema with my several friends early. It\u2019s hot outside, evrybody thinks it\u2019s nothing. Time goes fast! On the way home, all of us fall in love with those lovely smurfs. What a nice movie !
I had a great weekend last sunday. I, together with my family, went to Mount Tai. We enjoyed ourselves there very much. In the afternoon when we came home, I watched tv show, super girls. In the evening, I studied my Chinese for the next day's class. What a wonderful weekend!
Last saturday, I was very happy.On saturday, I got up at seven o'clock. After breakfast, I did my homework, It was a little difficult. Then I played computer games,It was very interesting, so I liked they very much.In the eveing ,I visit my friend--Hans,he was very friendly to me,I love him.I was veryhappy,I think you did too
I had a very happy weekend last week, because it was my birthday. I holda birthday party, and many friends were invited to join in it. In thelate morning, we gathered in a restaurant. After that, a wonderful lunchwas ready to wait for us. We planed to go to the K-box in the afternoonduring the lunch time, so we decided to book a big room. When wearrived there, some girls and boys were forced to sing songs with eachother face to face. A few were really shy, however, this could not be a\u3000reason for eacaping. When the evening came, what we waited for was a\u3000delicious cake! However, we just threw pieces to others'face as a game.
\u3000\u3000Many, of course, inclusive of me, became a "cake face". Time always\u3000flies, we had to say goodbye to each other, and we were actually hoping the next wonderful party!
I think everyone will have a busy and interesting weekend. Now, let me introduce my busy weekend to you.
On Saturday morning, I am going to the bookstore. I\u2019m going to buy some story-books and a Chinese-English and English-Chinese dictionary. I like reading story-books. I find them very interesting. Then I am going home. My home is near the bookstore. So I am going by bike. I like riding my bike. In the evening, I am going to play piano. Playing piano is my hobby.
On Sunday morning, I am going to do my homework. Now I am in Grade Six. I want to enter a good middle school next year. So I must study hard. In the afternoon, I am going shopping with my parents and my little brother. My mom says she is going to buy a pair of sneakers for me. I love going shopping. I think all of the girls like going shopping. Am I right.
On Sunday evening, I am going back to school by school bus. I love my weekend, how about you? Tell me something about your weekend.
Hi, this is Lisa. I am going to have a busy weekend. On Saturday, I\u2019m going to do my homework. Then, I\u2019m going to buy a book about Harry Potter. It\u2019s my favourite book. I have a lot of posters of Harry Potter. After lunch, I\u2019m going to visit my grandparents and play with my cousins, Denis and and Alice. They are active. Dennis likes singing very much. Alice likes drawing pictures. We often play hide-and-seek together. In the evening, I\u2019ll help my mom clean the house. I like help my mom with the housework. My mom always says I am a good girl. After that, I am going to read the book about Harry Potter. That will be fun.
On Sunday, I am going to the stamp show in Qinghui Gardens. I like collecting stamps. I have got 150 stamps. In the evening, I am going to back school. What about you? What are you going to do on the weekend? Can you tell me, please?
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时态错误，导致批卷老师会认为你学得不好会先扣4~5分 倘若你没有其他句子错误或语法错误会加上2~3分，在看字数，字数符合标准的话会不扣分，最后看你的字如果难看，会扣1~2分好看的话会加1~2分 得分最好13分 不好的话，也就7分
貌似扣5分吧
差不多5、6分吧
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