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Iamme\u6709\u8bed\u6cd5\u9519\u8bef\u5417\u6709\u7684\uff0c\u5e94\u8be5\u6539\u4e3a I am myself.
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1、把主语后置，用it 做形式主语，不定式做真正的主语，可避免头重脚轻。
2、去掉了for people，因为意思很显然是说人们，所以可以不用强调。
3、原句里面动词原形不能做主语噢
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pay attention是一个动词词组，不能做主语，应改为paying。
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