英语短文改错，急用！
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A couple of month\uff081\u3001months\uff0c\u590d\u6570\uff09 ago, I went to Qingdao with my parents. I learned that it lied(2\u3001lies\uff0c\u73b0\u5728\u65f6\u6001) in the eastern part of Shandong Province. It is far away from the city in what(3\u3001which\uff0c\u5b9a\u8bed\u4ece\u53e5\u5f15\u5bfc\u8bcd) we live, so when we got there it was getting dark. When we got off the bus, the wind was so much\uff084\u3001\u53bb\u6389much\uff0c\u591a\u4f59\uff09 heavy that we all felt very cold. Then we took a taxi to the hotel we have(5\u3001had\uff0c\u8fc7\u53bb\u5b8c\u6210\u65f6\u6001) ordered. The next morning, they(6\u3001we\uff0c\u6211\u4eec) had some seafood for breakfast, which tasted deliciously(7\u3001delicious\uff0c\u5f62\u5bb9\u8bcd). Then we went for \uff088\u3001\u52a0\u4e0aa\uff0c\u53bb\u6563\u6b65\uff0c\u4e60\u60ef\u8bf4\u6cd5\uff09walk in a park, see(9\u3001seeing\uff0c\u89c1\u5230) a few kites flying high in the sky. We spent a few days there. Once(10\u3001Though\uff0c\u867d\u7136) we were tired, we felt very happy.
The weekend is coming! I will be so \uff08\u6539\u4e3aas\uff09busy as a bee .On the Saturday morning,I have to rush to my math class.After it is fishing\uff08\u6539\u4e3afinished\uff09,I will have a dance class.I like danceing\uff08\u6539\u4e3adancing\uff09 because it gives myself \uff08\u6539\u4e3ame\uff09a chance to shape my body.I will pay a visit for\uff08\u6539\u4e3ato\uff09 my grandma on sunday.I am look\uff08\u6539\u4e3alooking\uff09 forward to that moment\uff01I am surely\uff08\u6539\u4e3asure\uff09 we will have a good time.On Sunday night,I will watch my favourite programs\uff08program\uff09 TV "HAPPY CAMP".I find it really interesting.It always makes me laugh out\uff08\u5220\u53bbout\uff09 loud.Besides.a lot stars appear in it.
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2 seldom 改always，因为前文说我丈夫good at购物，那么这里应该是老是喜欢这看看，那碰碰
3正确
4去掉the，他喜欢货比三家，加了the就表示他是特指固定的在几家店比较价格了，所以不用特指
5everything 改anything，因为否定句用anything或any啊
6hands改hand，因为On the other hand词组，另一方面，也因为是单数
7在as后加an，因为an unpleasant thing，常识咯
8去掉all，不通。除非it变成them才对，但是前面说了something
9aren't 改don't ，因为 interest 是动词，所以要用助动词
10正确
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