美国加州大学的申请文书怎么写 申请美国大学，文书应该如何写？
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A. \u4f60\u7684\u4e3b\u52a8\u6027initiative\uff0c\u52a8\u529bmotivation\uff0c\u9886\u5bfc\u80fd\u529bleadership\uff0c\u8010\u529b/\u97e7\u6027persistence\uff0c\u670d\u52a1\u4ed6\u4eba\u7684\u610f\u8bc6service to others\uff0c\u5176\u4ed6\u7279\u6b8a\u7684\u6f5c\u80fd\u4ee5\u53ca\u8de8\u6587\u5316\u4ea4\u6d41\u7684\u80cc\u666f/\u80fd\u529b\u7b49;
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Personal Statement Prompt 1: Describe the world you come from - for example, yourfamily, community or school - and tell us how your world has shaped your dreamsand aspirations.
\u9996\u5148\uff0c\u6211\u4eec\u8981\u8c28\u8bb0the personal statement should be personal, \u5b83\u662f\u5f55\u53d6\u5b98\u5458\u4e86\u89e3\u4f60\u7684\u7a97\u53e3\uff0c\u6bd4\u5982\u4f60\u7684\u4ef7\u503c\u89c2\uff0c\u4f60\u7684\u539f\u52a8\u529b\uff0cwhat drives you to excel\uff0c\u751a\u81f3what gets you out of bed in the morning (\u95f9\u949f?\u5b66\u4e60\u7684\u52a8\u529b?or\u2026) \u7b49\u7b49\u3002\u6240\u4ee5\u5728\u56de\u7b54\u8fd9\u4e2a\u9898\u76ee\u7684\u65f6\u5019\u8981be specific and detailed\u3002\u5199\u4f5c\u65f6\u6ce8\u610f\u4ee5\u4e0b\u51e0\u70b9\uff1a
A. \u201cworld\u201d\u7684\u5b9a\u4e49\u53ef\u4ee5\u5f88\u591a\uff0cit\u2019s up to you\u3002\u9898\u76ee\u5f53\u4e2d \u201cyour family, community or school\u201d \u4ec5\u4ec5\u53ea\u662f\u4e09\u4e2a\u4f8b\u5b50\uff0c\u4e0d\u8981\u56e0\u6b64\u800c\u5c40\u9650\u4e86\u81ea\u5df1\u7684\u601d\u7ef4\u3002\u4f60\u7684world\u53ef\u4ee5\u662f\u4f60\u7684\u7bee\u7403\u961f/\u8db3\u7403\u961f/\u821e\u8e48\u961f;\u5f53\u5730\u7684\u52a8\u7269\u6536\u5bb9\u6240;\u4f60\u5bb6\u7684\u53a8\u623f;\u67d0\u4e00\u672c\u4e66;\u751a\u81f3\u662f\u4f60\u7684\u60f3\u8c61\u4e2d\u7ecf\u5e38\u6d41\u8fde\u7684\u5730\u65b9\u3002\u6240\u4ee5\u8bf7\u4ed4\u7ec6\u60f3\u60f3\u5230\u5e95\u662f\u4ec0\u4e48\u6784\u5efa\u4e86\u4f60\u7684world?
B. Focus on the word \u201cHow.\u201d How has your world shaped you? \u8fd9\u4e2a\u9898\u76ee\u8981\u6c42\u4f60\u5c06\u4f60\u7684identity\u548c\u4f60\u7684world\u8054\u7cfb\u8d77\u6765\uff0c\u9610\u8ff0\u4e24\u8005\u4e4b\u95f4\u7684\u5173\u8054;\u8981\u6c42\u4f60\u5c55\u671b\u672a\u6765\u3002\u6240\u4ee5be analytical and introspective;
C. \u5c3d\u91cf\u907f\u514d\u8001\u751f\u5e38\u8c08\u7684\u8bdd\u9898\u3002\u5982\u679c\u8bf4\u4f60\u9009\u62e9\u7684theworld\u662f\u4f60\u7684family\u6216\u8005school\uff0c\u90a3\u5f88\u5bb9\u6613\u5c31\u843d\u5165\u4fd7\u5957\uff0c\u6bd4\u5982\u4f60\u7684\u5bb6\u4eba\uff0c\u4f60\u7684\u8001\u5e08\u662f\u5982\u4f55\u7684\u652f\u6301\u4f60\uff0c\u9f13\u52b1\u4f60\uff0c\u8ba9\u4f60\u53d8\u5f97\u66f4\u4e3a\u4f18\u79c0\u3002\u8fd9\u7c7b\u7684\u9898\u6750\u662f\u7edd\u5927\u90e8\u5206\u5b66\u751f\u7533\u8bf7\u65f6\u9009\u7528\u7684\uff0c\u90a3\u4e48\u4f60\u7684\u6587\u4e66\u5c31\u5f88\u96be\u8131\u9896\u800c\u51fa\u3002\u5f53\u7136\u4e5f\u4e0d\u662f\u8bf4\u4e0d\u80fd\u9009\u62e9family\u6216\u8005school \u7684\u9898\u6750\u53bb\u5199\uff0c\u4f46\u4e00\u5b9a\u8981\u786e\u4fdd\u6587\u7ae0\u5f53\u4e2d\u5145\u5206\u7684\u7a81\u51fa\u548c\u5c55\u73b0\u4e86\u4f60\u81ea\u5df1\uff0c\u800c\u4e0d\u662f\u4f60\u7684\u5bb6\u4eba\u6216\u8001\u5e08\u3002\u5c3d\u91cf\u7684\u4e2a\u6027\u5316\u3002\u6240\u4ee5\u9009\u6750\u5f88\u91cd\u8981\uff0c\u4e09\u601d\u800c\u540e\u884c;
D. Your "world" doesn't have to be a pretty place\u3002\u6709\u7684\u65f6\u5019\u82e6\u96be\u66f4\u80fd\u8ba9\u6211\u4eec\u6210\u957f\uff0c\u6240\u4ee5\u5982\u679c\u4f60\u7684\u6210\u957f\u73af\u5883\u4e2d\u5145\u6ee1\u4e86\u6311\u6218\u3001\u56f0\u96be\u3001\u8270\u8f9b\uff0c\u5c3d\u60c5\u5730\u5c55\u793a\u51fa\u6765\u3002\u5f53\u7136\uff0c\u8fd9\u4e0d\u662f\u53eb\u4f60\u5bf9\u81ea\u5df1\u906d\u9047\u7684\u82e6\u96be\u7ecf\u5386/\u73af\u5883\u53d1\u7262\u9a9a\u6216\u62b1\u6028\uff0c\u800c\u662f\u5c55\u793a\u81ea\u5df1\u5982\u4f55\u4ece\u8fd9\u6837\u7684\u73af\u5883\u4e2d\u6210\u957f\uff0chow negative environmental forces have left positive impact on you. How it defined who you are.
Personal statement prompt 2: Tell us about a personal quality, talent, accomplishment,contribution or experience that is important to you. What about this quality oraccomplishment makes you proud and how does it relate to the person youare?"
\u9898\u76ee\u4e2d\u63d0\u5230\u53ef\u4ee5\u5199\u4f60\u7684personal quality, talent, accomplishment, contribution, or experience\uff0c\u90a3\u6211\u8ba4\u4e3a\u5176\u5b9e\u662fyou have the freedom to write about almost anything. \u90a3\u4e48\u8981\u56de\u7b54\u8fd9\u4e2a\u95ee\u9898\uff0c\u9996\u5148\u9700\u8981\u660e\u786e\u91cd\u5fc3\u548ctopic\u3002So, what topics work best? \u6211\u8ba4\u4e3a\u9009\u62e9\u7684\u6807\u51c6\u53ea\u6709\u4e00\u4e2a\uff1ayou are passionate about the subject matter. \u5982\u679c\u4f60\u8ba4\u4e3a\u8db3\u7403\uff0c\u7bee\u7403\u6216\u8005\u6e38\u6cf3\u5bf9\u4f60\u7684\u6210\u957f\uff0c\u6210\u719f\u4ea7\u751f\u4e86\u91cd\u8981\u7684\u5f71\u54cd\uff0cthen write about it. \u5982\u679c\u4f60\u7684\u8eab\u4e0a\u53d1\u751f\u4e86\u4ec0\u4e48\u60b2\u5267\u8ba9\u4f60\u5bf9\u4eba\u751f\u6709\u4e86\u4ec0\u4e48\u65b0\u7684\u8ba4\u8bc6\u6216\u4f53\u4f1a\uff0cexplore the experience. \u5f55\u53d6\u5b98\u5458\u5e76\u4e0d\u4f1a\u504f\u597d\u67d0\u4e00\u4e2atopic\uff0c\u4ed6\u4eec\u4ec5\u4ec5\u662f\u5e0c\u671b\u901a\u8fc7\u4f60\u7684\u6587\u4e66\u66f4\u5145\u5206\u66f4\u597d\u7684\u4e86\u89e3\u4f60\u3002\u6240\u4ee5\u8fd9\u4e2a\u9898\u76ee\u9700\u8981\u4f60\u771f\u5b9e\u7684\u5c55\u73b0\u81ea\u5df1\uff0c\u5c55\u73b0\u81ea\u5df1\u7684passion\u3002\u5199\u4f5c\u65f6\u6ce8\u610f\u4ee5\u4e0b\u51e0\u70b9\uff1a
A. Domore than just "tell"\u3002\u867d\u7136\u8fd9\u4e2a\u9898\u76ee\u7684\u8981\u6c42\u662f\u201ctell\u201dus about\u2026. \u4f46\u662f\u4e00\u7bc7\u4f18\u79c0\u7684\u6587\u4e66\u6240\u8981\u505a\u7684\u5de5\u4f5c\u4e0d\u5e94\u4ec5\u4ec5\u662ftell\u3002It\u2019s always better to \u201cshow\u201d than to \u201ctell\u201d\u3002\u8fd9\u5c31\u662f\u6211\u4eec\u5e38\u8bf4\u7684\u8981\u628a\u81ea\u5df1\u201c\u79c0\u201d\u51fa\u6765\u3002\u6240\u4ee5\u5728\u8bb2\u8ff0\u4e00\u4e2aexperience\u7684\u65f6\u5019\uff0c\u4e0d\u4ec5\u4ec5\u53ea\u662f\u603b\u7ed3\u51fa\u5230\u5e95\u53d1\u751f\u4e86\u4ec0\u4e48\uff0c\u5728telling\u7684\u8fc7\u7a0b\u4e2d\uff0c\u4f60\u540c\u6837\u9700\u8981be analytical and reflective\u3002\u5728\u6587\u7ae0\u4e2d\u5c55\u73b0\u4f60\u7684critical thinking abilities\u7b49;
B. Pay attention to the word \u201cproud\u201d. \u5728\u57fa\u7763\u6559\u4f26\u7406\u4e2d\uff0cpride\u88ab\u770b\u4f5c\u662f\u4e03\u5b97\u7f6a(the Seven Deadly Sins)\u4e4b\u4e00\u3002\u6240\u4ee5\u5f53\u6587\u4e66\u9898\u76ee\u53eb\u4f60explain how your personal quality, experience.. makes you proud\u7684\u65f6\u5019\uff0c\u8bf7\u5c0f\u5fc3\u8c28\u614e\uff0c\u907f\u514d\u8ba9\u81ea\u5df1\u663e\u5f97\u81ea\u5938\u81ea\u5927\uff0c\u56e0\u4e3a\u6ca1\u6709\u5f55\u53d6\u5b98\u4f1a\u559c\u6b22\u8fd9\u6837\u7684\u5b66\u751f\u3002\u76f8\u53cd\uff0c\u5982\u679c\u4f60\u6587\u7ae0\u7684tone\u663e\u5f97\u5f88\u8c26\u5351\uff0c\u90a3\u4e48\u66f4\u80fd\u8d62\u5f97\u5f55\u53d6\u5b98\u7684\u9752\u7750;
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然后简单讲一下PS和essay的写作问题。美国名校申请文书写作最重要的就是简单(keep it simple)，不是语言越华丽越复杂越好，因为你想招生官每天要阅读大量的申请资料，只有那种简单有力重点突出的的文章才能打动他们，最好能在瞬间传递出你文字的力量。
申请美国硕士文书其他要注意的几点包括：要审题清楚，可以划出学校题目中的几个重点词，根据重点词来展开;要真诚、真实、不要空泛而谈，专家指出，尽可能多的事例体现出你的各方面能力;还有简单却不容易做到的，避免错别字和语法错误。
加州大学的个人陈述一共要写两篇。根据题目自由发挥，要有自己独特的观点和想法，不出现单词错误或者语法错误等。注意两篇文书的字数上限合计1000个单词，每篇字数不得少于250个单词。
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