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It not is my bag改为：It is not my bag.
What are eight and six
改为：What is eight and six？
I‘m in No.4 middle school
改为：I‘m in No. 4 Middle School.
This is our teacher.We love she very much改为：This is our teacher.We love （her） very much
there is a big apple in the tree
改为：There is a big apple on the tree
Let's to play with them
改为：Let's play with them
What's are in the box?There are some apples.
改为：What are there in the box?There are some apples.
The all boys are here
改为：All the boys are here
I think this is a good book. ----I don't think it
改为:I think this is a good book. ----I don't think so.
Each of us have a new desk.
改为：Each of us has a new desk.
He doesn't like hamburgers and chicken.
改为：He doesn't like hamburger and chicken
In weekends,what time do you usually run?
改为:At weekends,what time do you usually run?
Mike gets to home at about 4:50 in the afternoon
改为：Mike gets home at about 4:50 in the afternoon
is this his book?Yes,it's
改为：Is this his book?Yes,it's his。
For lunch,what do Lucy like to eat?
改为：For lunch,what does Lucy like to eat?
Does your brother have the lunch at school?
改为:Does your brother have lunch at school?
He often play games after school
改为：He often plays games after school
Because music is relaxing,so Jones likes it.
改为：Because music is relaxing, Jones likes it.
或者Music is relaxing,so Jones likes it.
My mother likes to see a book in the evening
改为：My mother likes to read a book in the evening
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4.she改为her
5.in改为on
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7.去掉are
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10.have改为has
11.in改为at
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it is not my bag.
I‘m in the No.4 middle school
This is our teacher.We love her very much
there is a big apple on the tree
Let's go to play with them
What's are in the box?There are some apples in the box
All boys are here.
I think this is a good book.----I don't think it good
“Each of us has a new desk.
He dosen`t like hamburger and chicken.
On weekends,what time do you usually run?
is this his book?Yes,it's his.
For lunch,what does Lucy like to eat?
Does your brother have lunch at school?
He often plays games after school
Because music is relaxing, Jones likes it.
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