高分！！！！！高手请找出我的语法错误，英语文章 请英语高手帮我检查修改一下文章的语法错误，急！！！谢谢。
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前后应该对应一下吧，前面是动名词后面怎么成了learn了？
2 I definitely will choose the first choice
后面用choice不太好，一般不用choose a choice吧？
3 When a student are facing some tough questions which are themselves cannot understand why was wrong.
a student了后面怎么是are?
定从有点小问题，建议改为When a student is facing some tough questions which they themselves can't understand.
4 teachers not just could help you to understand those certain subject questions, such as come from Math, Geology or English. but also point some shortages that you could never find them（去掉them) by yourself.
改为：teachers can not only help you understand...such as math(小写）but also point out(注意out)some shortages that you could never find by yourself.
5If a students feel nervous during the exams, of course did not do it well, and have a low score
students该为student(后面的也都改掉） of course后改为he won't do it well
6 As a result, that students（去掉S） may think himself（改为he) is so stupid and maybe even do(doesn't) not want study anymore. At this moment, if a patient teacher can smooth his negative mood by means of speaking soft(softly) by heart and give him great confidence, then probably that students(...) may conquer this problem.
7 Since no matter which subject the student choose, There is vast resource in that subject
把since 该为because
8
If there is a teacher, who have(has) so many teaching experiences for years and have(has) efficient tactic to help his or her students identify the main useful point, skipping those details from amount of certain knowledge. While(however), you can imagine, the students could go to another new height that they could not see them(去掉them) before
9
To be specific, during the vacation time, if students face some problems that(加个they) cannot find some(去掉) help from classmates or teacher, What he can do is (to )use the knowledge that he studied(learnt) in school, and find some related materials from the library or internet. In a sense, maybe this is a chance that(would) make himself to(去掉) explore his own potential.
10
Of course, the prerequisite-------study（working/studying) hard must be satisfied.
我就当是做改错题啦，呵呵……
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