帮忙修改托福作文！题目是 多读books about real events 还是novels
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\u6539\u6210 I think that they should be included in early education.
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We live in a world where almost all the knowledge can be obtained from books. (\u5e94\u4e3a\u53e5\u53f7\uff0ctherefore \u662f\u526f\u8bcd\uff0c\u4e0d\u80fd\u5f15\u5bfc\u4e24\u4e2a\u53e5\u5b50)Therefore a large amount of people believe that knowledge contained in(from) books are(is) the most crucial. However, is it a wise idea? Is that mean(Does it mean that) we can ignore the knowledge gained from experience? Of course not.
No doubt that it is books that have a huge number of knowledge about various aspects, such as history, science, decoration, even cosmetology.\uff08No doubt that books contain knowledge on all aspects, e.g. history, science, decoration, even cosmetology.\uff09 It seems that everyone can(will) benefit by kinds of specialized books. Only a book, can provide students like me methods of solutions to some math problems, can tell housewives how to prepare a delicious meal, can teach the peasantry skills of cultivation. Besides, it is quite convenient to get a book nowadays(it is quite easy to get a book you needed with the help of modern information system). Whether we borrow a book from near library or buy one from a bookshop, we can always find what we need. And with the development of printing, printed matters became cheaper so that everybody can afford them.
On the other hand, knowledge acquired from experience also plays a imperative role (and knowledge gain from this way can never be replaced by that from books). Such kind of knowledge can be absorbed better and understood deeply(easier \u4fdd\u6301\u53e5\u5b50\u7684\u5bf9\u79f0) by people. Take me myself as an example, when I learned a new experiment of physics, not until I made it by myself can I comprehend it. In high schools of our country, what we lack of is this efficient way to gain knowledge through experience. What we always do is to read lots of thick books of every subject, which often makes study a tedious thing. Maybe one will argue that the knowledge acquired from experience is not so precise so that it will mislead us to a diverse direction. We cannot deny it, but is that knowledge included in books usually definite? In our modern society, producers of books surely know that people never suspect the knowledge from a book at all, so they increasely print their products to get a profit without considering the qualities of them. Then experts could search out a number of mistakes in those so-called specialized books. Consequently, we should have a sense of judgment rather than depend on books blindly.
In a word, these two type of knowledge both have their advantages and disadvantages, so we ought not to actually say (that)which one is more important (than another). In my opinion, the most essential thing is (to make full use of knowledge gained from books and experience and combine them efficiently )how to make full use of the value of the two sources and combine them efficiently.
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