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Last week,we had(过去时) an interview with the eye-doctor professor Wang about the short-sightedness of Primary and middle school students in our country.From the basically information, the incidence rate of short-sightedness is a little bit highter than 50% and the quantity of people took the first of ranking in the world.
Experts explained(时态) that the reason of the question（改为problem） is complicated,and there is no medicine to cure it.
They suggest not use eyes too much,and join more outdoor activities.(suggest后面不加to)
The special tips that the short-sightedness related with how to use your pen.(这个句不通顺)
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