资深老师答：英语作文15分，离题?
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This is my English teacher.
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I love my Ehglish teacher
I have an English teacher.her name is Amy.She is from China.she is very young,and she is very beautiful.her class is very interesting,and I can learn many knowledge from it.I like her class very much and my favourite subject is English.Amy is very kind to me and I love her very much.
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