英语改错：When father bought me a computer for a birthday present in last year，I felt very excited When my father bought me a com...

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1 When father bought me a computer as a birthday present in(\u53bb\u6389in) last year, I felt very excited. As we all know, computers are getting more usefully(\u6539useful) nowadays. Mush information can be stored in it(\u6539them). We can learn that(\u6539what) has lately happened in the world on(\u6539in) the Internet. In the past, people had to do lots of work which were(\u6539was) very dangerous. Now, computers can do it instead. When the exam is coming, I do exercise on my computer. Then it will correct them but(\u6539and) tell me the right answers. It is more convenient for me (\u52a0to)prepare for the exam than before. The computer have(\u6539has) become a real firend of mine.

2 Many a teacher are(\u6539is) worried about the effects of television on young people. According to studies, any children spend more time watching television as(\u6539than) they soeed in school. Because(\u52a0of) so much viewing, children may not develop the habit of read(\u6539reading) and the ability to enjoy themselves. No one worries mush about the reading radio programme(\u6539programmes) young people listen to, although radios can be very noise(\u6539noisy). Teachers also wonder about the effects of television commercials. On(\u6539Within) one year the(\u6539an) average child will see 25,000 television commercials. They are all planned and written by grown-ups to make children to(\u53bb\u6389to) want things that they don't real(\u6539really) need.

1. as \u540e\u52a0 a 2. exciting-excited 3. Informations-Information 4. that-what 5. have-had 6. but-however 7. exercise -exercises 8. it-them 9. On-In 10. really-real

I felt very excited when I recived a computer as a birthday gift from my father last year.直接用状语从句就行了，没那么复杂。原句中的for用法不对，in多余。

正确答案应该是When father bought me a computer for a birthday present (in) last year，I felt very excited
把in去掉 其他地方没错的

When father bought me a computer “AS” a birthday present “-” last year，I felt very excited

“作为”一件生日礼物；last year 前面不用in

When father bought me a computer as a birthday present last year，I felt very excited

as a birthday present
in last year去掉in

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