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Self-introduction
Hello everyone! My is......, from Qinzhou. I\u2019m so glad to meet you, and I\u2019m currently a student at Guangxi Textile Industrial School. my major is knitting. It\u2019s my pleasure to join the CHAMPION training camp, because I love English and I hope I can learn something in the training for my future work. As we all know English is very useful in every field.
My English is limited that\u2019s why I\u2019m here. I know it\u2019s a huge challenge for me to conquer English, but I believe that \u201cNo pains, no gains, success belongs to the persevering\u201d, I hope I can learn more from you, Thank you!
it's a great honor for me to have the opportunity for the interview. first of all ,please let me introduce myself ,my name is xxx , from xxx province. i graduated from wz medical college (加上时间，如 in 2012） , majoring in ophthalmology & optometry.
i have been an esay-going and responsible student and devoted myself to industrious study aiming to be a qualified doctor, whcich, in return , has brought me to this opportunity of the interview here .meanwhile i have successfully passed the 6th level of China's national English proficiency test (CET 6). What's more, i have also been an active member of the student union that has made my college life more colorful.
during my internship in the affiliated hospital of zhejiang university ,i have learned how to use medical equipment such as fundus pre-set lens and slit lamp ,and i've also served as the first assistant in strabotomy . i know there is still a long way to go before i become a qualified ophthalmologist, which is in fact the main reason for further education . i want to enhance my research ability in ophthalmology ,especially in cataract. so i sincerely hope you could give me the opportunity to study in zhejiang university . i believe postgraduate study will enrich my knowledge and help me establish a solid fundation for my future development .
thank you for giving me the opportunity for the interview ! thank you very much !
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祝你成功！
Dear professors
It's a great honor for me to have the opportunity for the today's interview. first of all ,please let me introduce myself to everyone ,my name is xxx ,i come from xxx province .Graduated from wz medical college ,and my major is ophthalmology & optometry. my hobby is wide.including collecting coins, stamps and making food.delicious .
I am a very esay-going ,responsible and hardworking boy ,so i have devoted myself to study when I was in university,and my aim is to be a qualified doctor Not only i have passed cet 6,but am i postive in university ,i participated in kinds of the student union to make my college life more colorful.
During I was in affiliated hospital of zhejiang university ,i have learned how to use fundus pre-set lens and slit lamp ,and i've also served as the firt assistant in strabotomy . i know there is a long way to become a qualified ophthalmologist,,but I am sure that I'll be, which push me for the further education . i want to enhance my research ability in ophthalmology ,especially in cataract feild,so i hope professors *** to give me an opportunity to study in zhejiang university . i think postgraduate study can enrich my knwoledeg and establish a solid fundation for my further profession .
That is all about me ,thank you for your coming ! thank you very much
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Respected professors,
It’s my great honor to have the opportunity for the interview.
First of all, please let me introduce myself. My name is xxx from xxx Province. I graduated from WZ Medical College, majoring in ophthalmology & optometry. My hobby is to collect things, such as coins, stamps and other things delicately-made. And I am a very easy-going and responsible boy by nature.
I have been devoting myself to professional study since enrollment, aiming at becoming a qualified doctor. My hard-working gets good pay in return, that’s why I’m here for the interview today. Meanwhile I have passed CET 6 and, as a member of the Student Union, I have been taking part in all activities of it for enrich my college life.
During my internship in the Affiliated Hospital of Zhejiang University, I have physically learned how to use fundus pre-set lens and slit lamp, and have served as the first assistant in some strabotomies. I know there is a long way to go before becoming a qualified ophthalmologist, that’s why I am eager for further education. I want to enhance my research ability in ophthalmology, especially in cataract. Therefore, respected sirs, I sincerely hope you will give me the opportunity to learn from you in Zhejiang University. I think postgraduate study will enrich my knowledge and broaden my vision, as well as lay a solid foundation for my future profession and career.
Thank you very much! Thank you all!
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