自己写了一篇英语演讲稿，请大家帮我找一找语法错误，帮忙修改一下。谢谢
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Hello everyone,before the talk,I want to talk something about Wang Shouren.
he had ever said that he wants to be a sage like Confucius.But the only thing \u52a0\u4e0a(that)he got was the loud laugh.
To be honest,there are few people \u52a0\u4e0a(which are) [able to be]\u6539\u6210\u3010qualified to be\u3011 called "sage".It seemed that the dream was impossible [of achievement]\u6539\u6210\u3010to achieve\u3011.
However\uff0che kept holding on.
On the [road]\u6539\u6210\u3010way\u3011 to the dream,he met lots of [changellenges]\u62fc\u9519\uff0c\u5e94\u662f\u3010challenges\u3011\uff08\u4f60\u662f\u60f3\u8868\u8fbe\u201c\u4ed6\u9047\u5230\u5f88\u591a\u56f0\u96be\u201d\u5427\uff1f\u90a3\u5e94\u7528difficulties\uff09,but he kept up(\u540e\u9762\u4e0d\u52a0obj.\u7684\u8bdd\u6700\u597d\u6539\u6210but his spirit still kept up well.\u610f\u8c13\u5c3d\u7ba1\u906d\u53d7\u632b\u6298, \u4ed6\u4ecd\u65e7\u5145\u6ee1\u6597\u5fd7\u3002).
19 years later,he created the Shingaku and finally made his dream come true.
See\uff08\u8fd9\u91cc\u5b8c\u5168\u662fChinese English,\u5e94\u6539\u4e3aBy this token,\u5373\u7531\u6b64\u770b\u6765\uff09,dreams always seem reachless before it come true.But if we work hard and never give up,we'll succeed.Nothing is impossible for [one who](\u8fd9\u91cc\u8981\u5f3a\u8c03\u8bed\u6c14\uff0c\u6700\u597d\u6539\u6210anyone that) sets his mind on it,isn't it?
(That's all.Thank you for your listening. )\u7ed3\u675f\u8bed\u592a\u8001\u5957\uff0c\u800c\u4e14\u7b2c\u4e8c\u53e5\u662f\u82f1\u8bed\u542c\u529b\u7684\u7ed3\u675f\u8bed\uff01\u8bd5\u8bd5\u8fd9\u4e2aThat's the end of my speech,thank you very much for being here.
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I\u2019m very glad to stand here and give you a short speech.
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It's my honor to be here and have a speech.
Today my topic is \u201cyouth\u201d.
My topic today is "youth".
I hope you will like it, and found the importance in your youth so that more cherish it.
I hope you will like it, and realize the importance of your youth so that you'll cherish it more.
twon 串错了, 是town
第三行的句子改成:Qingdao's bathing beach is famous
第四行 good 加上 tourist attraction
第六行 删去much(因为跟more重复了)
第七行 删去And, 删去 something
第八行 by german 加 in the past, most of 加the, in "German style"
第十行 make Qingdao "looks" like a European country
最后, That's all I want to say, thank you 比较好
Hello,everyone
Today I want to tell you something about my hometown-Qingdao.Qingdao is a very beautiful and mordern city.Qingdao is famous for it's bathing beach,which is known by everyone.In fact,I think the Laoshan Mountain is also a good attraction in Qingdao.It may not be as tall as the Mountain Tai.But it's scenery is much more beautiful than most of the moutains in our country.The air on
this mountain is pure and fresh.Except for LaoShan Mountain,I want to talk something about Qingdao's buildings.Because Qingdao used to be occupied by German,most of the buildings in Qingdao are in Germany style.You can see many buildings in western style,which make Qingdao like a European country. Welcome to my hometown.That's all,thank you
大概就是这样了〜
写的不错嘛，除了短句用太多。最好分一下点，别人听起来会清晰点，加个first，second之类的吧
倒数第二行 Like前加be
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