请帮忙看看这段英语作文有什么语法错误的地方 急！！！求大神们看看这篇英语作文，有没有什么语法错误和可以提...
\u5e2e\u5fd9\u770b\u770b\u4e0b\u9762\u8fd9\u7bc7\u82f1\u8bed\u4f5c\u6587\u6709\u4ec0\u4e48\u8bed\u6cd5\u9519\u8bef\u6216\u4e0d\u6070\u5f53\u7684\u5730\u65b9 \u9ebb\u70e6\u4e86\uff01Scientists have sent a spaceship to Mars . However,they haven't (\u6539\u6210\u5b8c\u6210\u65f6\uff0c\u539f\u6587\u65f6\u6001\u6df7\u7528\u4e86\uff09discovered any life on Mars. And astronauts(\u4e3b\u8c13\u642d\u914d\u4e0d\u5f53\uff0c\u4e3b\u8bed\u6539\u6210\u590d\u6570) have already been to the moon. Scientists have also discovered many other galaxies.It is impossible to imagine\uff08\u8fd9\u4e00\u53e5\u610f\u601d\u6ca1\u770b\u61c2\uff09.And scientists have sent spaceships to the planet Mars to takes photos.\uff08\u6700\u540e\u4e00\u53e5\u548c\u7b2c\u4e00\u53e5\u662f\u91cd\u590d\u7684\uff0c\u5c31\u4fdd\u7559\u4e00\u53e5\u5427\u3002\u628a\u4e24\u53e5\u5408\u6210\u4e00\u53e5\uff09
So I want to communicate with you.
Doctor Chen \u524d\u4e0d\u53ef\u4ee5\u7528 the
\u7b2c\u4e00\u6bb5\u7684whose theme\u8981\u7528 in which the theme
Staying up \u6211\u60f3\u4f60\u8bf4\u7684\u662f\u665a\u7761 \u665a\u7761\u662f staying up late
Daily life \u540e\u9762\u90a3\u4e2a\u4e0d\u7528decreasing \u7528 and decrease \u505a\u4e00\u4e2a\u8fde\u53e5
\u4e4b\u540e\u4e0d\u8981\u7528What\u2019s more \u5199\u4fe1\u8bf7\u7528moreover
\u90a3\u4e2a\u98df\u7269\u4e0d\u597d\u5403\u4e5f\u8981\u5403\u7684\u5730\u65b9\u7528even though you think it doesn\u2019t taste good. \u90a3\u4e2a\u53e5\u5b50\u540e\u9762\u90e8\u5206\u8bed\u6cd5\u9519\u7684\u5f88\u79bb\u8c31\u76f4\u63a5\u6539\u6210\u8fd9\u4e2a
\u7136\u540e\u6700\u540e\u795d\u798f\u53e5fit\u4e0d\u662f\u540d\u8bcd \u8981\u7528\u540d\u8bcd\u7684\u8bdd\u7528fitness
\u60f3\u6539\u7684\u8bdd\u53ef\u4ee5\u6539\u8fd9\u4e2a
Wish you a happy life and well-being(\u6216\u8005wellness)
\u4e0d\u660e\u767d\u7684\u8bdd\u53ef\u4ee5\u8ffd\u95ee
第二行 must改成had better sipirit首先不加s，另外用在这也不对，这词意思精神，应该为mind,in good mind指保持好心情，这是习语，固定用法
不要总用I think，举个例子，第四行可以改成，I like music quite a lot, so I often enjoy myself with light music when I have some spare time, which always makes me fell relax and comfortebal after all day's hardwok.尽量用插入语和变换句式让你的表达变得丰富一些。
写的很好，没有错的。翻译是：
在我们的生活中，我们会有很多的经验。他们经常影响我们的感觉。他们可以让我们快乐或悲伤。坏的感觉对我们的健康是有害的。所以我们必须保持良好的精神。这里有一些建议：
1。我非常喜欢音乐。所以我觉得音乐能让我开心。
2。与朋友聊天是一个有用的想法。你可以从他们那里得到一些帮助。
3。我觉得快乐，当我穿上我最喜欢的衣服。我想你也会感到快乐，当你穿上你最喜欢的衣服。
4睡眠。也许能改变我们的心情。如果我们睡得好，我们就会感到高兴，当我们起床的时候。
第一行：may不要，they often affect our ideas,make happy and sad.
第二行：is bad for healthy.我个人觉得改成the negative attitude is bad for future.must keep a positive attitude. some advices:
I like music very much,so去掉，make me fresh,again去掉
talk加ing ,我个人会改成 talking with friends is a good choice,we can get some useful imformation from them.
if i am wearing my favorite clothes,i will feel happy,so you can try it
feelings的S去掉，when we sleep well,we will feel relax and energetic after getting up
用形容词不要只懂用happy。
. 2.Talk with friends is a useful idea.You can get some help from them.这句中的“talk”应用“talking”
4.Maybe sleep can change our feelings.If we sleep well, we will feel happy when we get up.这句中的“sleep”应该为“sleeping”
我个人认为“So we must stay in good spirits.”这句中的“must”用“should”可能更好一些。
希望能帮到你！！！
we may have many experiences如果你是想说我们也许有许多经历，那就应该用maybe.
They affect our fellings often应该把often放在they之后。
So I think music can make me happy again.用again不知道你要表达什么。
Talk with friends is a useful idea应该用talking.
.I will feel happy 去掉will
Maybe sleep can change 用sleeping
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