片段练习，写一处景物把看到的，听到的写下来200字 摘抄一处景物的由景到人的顺序写一个片段200字到300字
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The cartoon describes the teenagers' pressure under the influence of the theory " integrated development" by parents. From the cartoon, the teen shows his fear of the learning the multiple tasks, such as guitar, piano, flute, art. All the instruments and interests are running to him. However, the teen is incapable to learning all of them. Therefore, the teen runs away.
Following the improvements of living standard and education levels, more and more parents concentrate on the development of their children. Except for the education in school, which focus on the learning of academic skills, parents favored the children's study out of school. The term " integrated development" is becoming a honor to the students. The parents paid a large amount of money for the " integrated development", which involves the extra interests and activities, such as music, dance, drawing. Nevertheless, the situation turns to the opposite way when the pressure becomes too extreme. The students don't even acquired enough amount of time to enroll into these interests while they need to maintain the high grade in academy in school. One of the consequences is the teenagers are not able to suffer from the endless school work and the activities and finally they quits.
From the parents' perspective, the purpose of the " integrated development" is to help their children to be successful. However, the parents are also responsible for their children's feeling and happiness. Too much work and activities would drive their children crazy. Thus, the parents needs to consolidate the communication with their children and understand their children's situation.
写作思路及要点：以春天的景物为例，详细介绍春天的景物。
正文：
春天来了，沉睡的大地苏醒了。
春姐姐把大地装饰得五彩缤纷，还给大地母亲织了一件绿色的衣裙，在这美好、祥和的季节里，人们相互邀约：“春天来了，春天来了，快到公园踏青吧。”我也随着妈妈去踏青，一路上，我一直追问妈妈：“春天是什么样子的呢？”
妈妈指着四周那蓝蓝的天，白白的云，清清的流水，暖暖的风，轻柔地说：“这不就是春天吗？”我顺着妈妈手指的方向望去，青山绿水好不迷人，真的是风景如画啊！一走进公园，便有一阵清凉之中带着淡淡花香之气飘了过来，让我陶醉……放眼望去，处处洋溢着春天的气息。
湛蓝的天空中，喜鹊们欢快地演奏着“春之曲”。大地上，小草顽皮地探出了头，在春风的鼓舞下，东瞧瞧，西望望，时不时地摇晃着小脑袋。
花坛里许许多多漂亮的花儿，一个个争奇斗艳，你不让我，我不让你。各个红的像火，粉的似霞，白的如雪，柳树上柳枝叶被春风春雨两兄妹在天空中春的调色板给染绿了。
一个个嫩芽悄悄地爬满了枝头，在春风的吹动春雨的滋润下，仿佛是一个阿娜多姿的少女，春风好似一把剪刀，把它理得更加美丽，此情此景，我不禁想起那句诗：“不知细叶谁裁出，二月春风似剪刀。”这就是我发现的春天，你找到了吗？
晨曦初露，村内到处飘飘缈缈，笼罩着一层轻轻的薄雾，犹如羞达达的少女蒙上一层薄薄的面纱，给人一种轻柔朦胧的美感。不久，拂面的清风吹走了薄雾，映入眼帘的是一片大大的荷花池。池中荷花千娇百媚，有的亭亭玉立，有的鹤立鸡群，有的则边冒出水面的勇气也没有。这一景，流淌着淡淡的碧光。我犹如进入了蓬莱仙境，鸟语花香，一天的开始由大自然的美景拉开了序幕。
来到村后面的小山，只见青树绿蔓，草盛花繁，一派生机勃勃的景象。蜜蜂从睡梦中醒来，嘤嘤嗡嗡地开始了它一天的工作。蝴蝶也展开漂亮的翅膀，在繁花绿草中翩翩起舞。空地上，一群天真无邪的小孩在追逐吵闹，追蜜蜂，扑蝴蝶，采鲜花……你争我抢，玩得不亦乐乎。大自然在唱歌了，它以优美的旋律告诉我们——这是它的声音，使人快乐的声音！
再向前走，只听见蝉鸣鸟叫。抬头一望，只见画眉、杜鹃在树上跳跳走走，快活得犹如神仙。这样一幅诗情画意的图画，我还没有欣赏完，一阵流水声引起了我的注意。哇，大自然真的会妙手点睛！我赶快向小林走去，原来是一条弯弯曲曲的小溪。溪水清澈见底，鹅卵石粒粒可数，小鱼在水里快活地游来游去，啊！大自然又为我们奏上一曲了。
其实，大自然的声音处处可听，只是现在人们都在忙碌，没有注意到罢了。在紧张的生活中透不过气来时，我们不妨到山间来走一走吧，大自然的声音绝对会我们放松身心，心旷神怡，使我们产生丰富的想象，领悟到可贵的哲理，也让我们久久回味，忘记一切世俗的烦忧。
敞开胸怀，接受一切属于大自然的声音吧，我们就会活得很开心！
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