英语短文改错 10处!!! 英语短文改错，10处

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\u66f4\u6b63\u5728\u62ec\u53f7\u5904\u6807\u51fa,\u5171\u5341\u5904!
In (\u52a0\u5165the) autumn of 1985,when I was a young man,I was traveling in the north of India.(One) evening,after (hunting) in the forest all day,I was returning to the place (where) I had put up my tent.It was getting dark,(and) I was walking along a road.Suddenly I saw two eye glaring at me from (between) the trees.What (could) I do?Should I jump into the river to save my life?Then I looked (to) the right.In the river there (was) a big crocodile waiting to welcome me with its mouth (\u53bb\u6389was) wide open.
\u53e6\uff1asave my live\u5e94\u8be5\u662fsave my life\u7684\u9519\u6253

1.friend\u6539\u4e3a\u590d\u6570\u30022.ask\u8981\u52a0for\u642d\u914d3.money\u524d\u8981\u52a0the4.he\u6539\u6210i5.the other half\u4e2d\u7684half \u53bb\u63896.was pleased \u6539\u4e3awould be pleased7.a month later8.give\u6539\u4e3agave9.how much\u5c06much\u53bb\u638910.\u5c06rode\u6539\u4e3awent

第一行 friend 改为 friends
第二行 it 改为 one that 改为which
第三行 father后面 加for 最后一个he 改为 i
第四行 school前去掉the
第五行 if改为 when . after改为later。 gives 改为gave
第六行 when 去掉 。how后面 去掉much

friend改成friends it改为one that改为it father后面加for he改为I
去掉after后面的the if改为when gives改为gave 去掉other后的when
can改为cant

第一行：friend----friends
第二行：it----one
第三行：asked---asked my father for the money . 最后一个he-----I
第四行： the school------school
第五行：if------when after-----later gives----gave
第六行：第一个when 删掉， much删掉

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