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\u5e94\u8be5\u662f\u95eearen't you a pig?\u4f60\u96be\u9053\u4e0d\u662f\u4e00\u5934\u732a\u5417\uff1f
Yes I am:\u4e0d\uff0c\u6211\u662f\u4e00\u5934\u732a
No I am not \u662f\u7684\uff0c\u6211\u4e0d\u662f
小说描述约六十年岁的资深渔民。一次，他到渔船，仅在海中。高级渔夫，然后发现了一个可怕的庞大的马林，这从未见过。他坚持以处理与大马林鱼，虽然他知道得很清楚，很难取胜。由于该鱼的气味大马林，几个人群鲨鱼来抢夺该马林就船民之后，但旧的人仍然不希望像这样放弃，最后，他打败了未来鲨鱼和返回港口让其他渔民不要佩服已。
在我看来，岁的渔夫，可以成功地赶上这么庞大的马林，由于他令人难以置信的坚韧性。当他意识到，这是并不是一件容易的，他认为要赶上庞大的马林，他并没有放弃，但坚持它。虽然危险的鲨鱼，来到吃马林超过及以上，正在激烈的较前的时间，岁的渔夫，尽力摆脱鲨鱼，一个接一个。如果他没有被这种顽强的，巨大的成功，他将已是不可能的。据高级渔夫，根据作者的笔名，我们可以看到，
只要我们始终保持顽强，我敢肯定我们会取得成功做出作为岁的渔夫，无论我们做什么。
i非常佩服这名渔民。在事实上，我不是作为坚韧的作为我的偶像在小说中。当我面对的面对的几个问题，我有时没有给试试看，只要决定放弃。从现在起，我将了解从旧费舍尔人的精神。
1.书的名字应该加双引号"", 然后而可以把这两本用and连起来,不用写豆号了.
2.这句The novel description was about sixty years of age senior fisherman. 应该在about 和 sixty years 当中加 an.
3.这句The senior fisherman then discovered a terribly huge marlin which had never been seen.把 never been seen 该成 never been seen before 会更好一点
4. Because of the fishy smell of the big marlin.听起来很不舒服,我决得应该把 Big 取掉
5.but the old person still did not hope like this to give up这个用法是不对的,应该改成but the old per 应该应该son is still not likely to give up marlin.最后应该用句号
6.Finally he defeated the coming sharks and returned to the harbor and let other fishermen not admire already.这句句子不对,应该改成Finally he defeated the coming sharks and returned to the harbor, and other fisher man started to admire him.
7.In my opinion, the old fisherman could be succeeded in catching such a huge marlin owing to his incredible tenacity.这句应该把be拿掉.
其他的大该都差不多对了, 总体我决得你写的还不错.只是以后要注以语法.
开头的along with可以改成compared with与...相比,可以体现出后面说的最喜欢的最字.
description was about 改成describes
terribly是副词,改成terribe形容词修饰名词
When he realized 的when 可以改成Although,不会跟后面的but 重复
faced to faced 改成am to face=be to do sth.避免重复
我很不好意思的讲，似乎错了不少。很多都是中国试直译，里面一些单词我也不认识。你可以请教一下高中英语老师，那最好不过了。
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