英语短文改错，10处
\u82f1\u8bed\u77ed\u6587\u6539\u9519\uff0810\u5904\u9519\uff09good--better
\u5728because\u540e\u52a0\u4e0ait
easy--easier
\u53bb\u6389While\u6216\u6539\u6210But
informations--information
or--and
reasons to it--reasons for it
quiet--quietly
to be better--to better
basing--based
Several days ago,A few of my friends and I went on a picnic on the beach of the Jialing River.It was about five miles far from the city.We arrived at that place in the morning.Most of us went swimming immediately.While in the water,we played an interesting game.Those who were on the beach had some other activities.Some of them even sang and danced happily.There were still others who were interested in nothing,except picking beautiful stones.In the evening,we returned home.What a happy day it was!
best friend (for) many years 介词搭配错误
didn't think her friend (would)mind it 时态一致
her friend did seem to (had) minded it 时态
Therefore改为However 连词
She stopped (visting) her 去掉visiting前的to 动词固定搭配
was such (a) mean woman 冠词
She was (truely) sorry 副词
(words) really mean a lot 名词复数
(we) should really think twice 前后主语不一致
in order not to (hurt) 固定搭配
1.第一行，of去掉
2.第二行。will改为would，3.therefore改为however。
4.第四行。such后加一个a.
5.第五行。true改为truely.
6.第六行，word改为words。
7.第七行，you改为we。8.hurting改为hurt。
我只找到这么多。
ullest use of these blessed faculties. Their eyes and ears take in all sights and sounds
改错change
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