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Joe and I decided to take the long trip we'd always wanted across the country. We were like young kids buying our camper and stocking it with all the necessities of life. Bella bakes the best rhubarb pie. We started out in early spring from Minneapolis and headed west across the northern part of the country. We both enjoyed those people we met at the trailer park. Joe received a watch at his retirement dinner. To our surprise\uff0c we found that we liked the warm southern regions very much\uff0c and so we decided to stay here in New Mexico.
\u672c\u6bb5\u7684\u4e3b\u9898\u53e5\u662f\u6bb5\u9996\u53e5\uff0ccontrolling idea\uff08\u4e2d\u5fc3\u601d\u60f3\uff09\u662ftake the long trip across the country.\u6587\u4e2d\u51fa\u73b0\u4e24\u4e2airrelevant sentences\uff0c\u4e00\u4e2a\u662fBella bakes the best rhubarb pie\uff0c\u8fd9\u4e00\u6bb5\u662f\u8bb2\u7684\u662fJoe and I \uff0c\u4e2d\u95f4\u51fa\u73b0\u4e00\u4e2aBella\u662f\u4e0d\u5408\u9002\u7684\u3002\u8fd8\u6709\uff0cJoe received a watch at his retirement dinner\u8fd9\u4e00\u53e5\u66f4\u662f\u4e0e\u4e3b\u9898\u53e5\u4e0d\u76f8\u5173\u3002\u8003\u751f\u5728\u56db\u7ea7\u7edf\u8003\u7684\u4f5c\u6587\u5377\u4e0a\u5e38\u5e38\u56e0\u4e3a\u9020\u51fairrelevant sentences\uff08\u4e0d\u76f8\u5173\u8bed\u53e5\uff09\u800c\u4e22\u5206\uff0c\u503c\u5f97\u5f15\u8d77\u6ce8\u610f\u3002\u518d\u770b\u4e00\u4e2a\u4f8b\u5b50\uff1a
My name is Roseanna\uff0c and I like to keep physically fit. I used to weigh two hundred pounds\uff0c but I joined the YMCA for an exercise class and diet program. In one year I lost eighty pounds. I feel much better and never want to have that much weight on my five-feet frame again. I bought two new suitcases last week. Everyday I practice jogging three miles\uff0c swimming fifteen laps\uff0c lifting twenty-pound weights and playing tennis for one hour. My mother was a premature baby.
\u672c\u6bb5\u7684controlling idea \u662flike to deep physically fit\uff0c\u4f46\u6bb5\u4e2d\u6709\u4e24\u4e2airrelevant sentences\uff0c\u4e00\u4e2a\u662fI bought two new suitcases last week\uff0c\u53e6\u4e00\u4e2a\u662fMy mother was a premature baby.
\u4ece\u4e0a\u9762\u4e24\u4e2a\u4f8b\u5b50\u53ef\u4ee5\u770b\u51fa\uff0cnative speakers\u540c\u6837\u4f1a\u9020\u51fa\u6765irrelevant sentences.\u5377\u9762\u4e0a\u5982\u679c\u8fd9\u79cd\u53e5\u5b50\u591a\u4e86\uff0c\u9020\u6210\u504f\u9898\u6216\u79bb\u9898\uff0c\u90a3\u95ee\u9898\u5c31\u66f4\u4e25\u91cd\u4e86\u3002
2\u3001\u5b8c\u6574\u6027
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Physical work can be a useful form of therapy for a mind in turmoil. Work concentrates your thoughts on a concrete task. Besides\uff0c it is more useful to work \u2014\u2014 you produce something rather than more anxiety or depression.
\u672c\u6bb5\u7684\u4e3b\u9898\u53e5\u662f\u6bb5\u9996\u53e5\u3002\u672c\u6bb5\u7684\u4e24\u4e2a\u63a8\u5c55\u53e5\u5747\u4e0d\u80fd\u56de\u7b54\u4e3b\u9898\u53e5\u4e2d\u63d0\u51fa\u7684\u95ee\u9898\u3002\u4ec0\u4e48\u662f\u201ca mind in turmoil\u201d\uff08\u5fc3\u5883\u4e0d\u5e73\u9759\uff09Physical work\u53c8\u5982\u4f55\u80fd\u6539\u53d8\u8fd9\u79cd\u60c5\u51b5\uff1f\u4e3a\u4ec0\u4e48\u5b83\u80fd\u8d77therapy\u7684\u4f5c\u7528\uff1f\u8bfb\u8005\u5f97\u4e0d\u5230\u660e\u786e\u7684\u7b54\u6848\u3002\u7531\u4e8e\u56db\u7ea7\u7edf\u8003\u7684\u4f5c\u6587\u90e8\u5206\u53ea\u8981\u6c42\u5199\u4e00\u7bc7100\uff5e120\u4e2a\u8bcd\u7684\u4e09\u6bb5\u5f0f\u77ed\u6587\uff0c\u6bcf\u4e00\u6bb5\u53ea\u6709\u5927\u7ea640\u4e2a\u8bcd\u5de6\u53f3\uff0c\u56e0\u6b64\uff0c\u8981\u8fbe\u5230\u5b8c\u6574\u5c31\u5fc5\u987b\u5c3d\u53ef\u80fd\u5730\u7b80\u660e\u3002\u4f8b\u5982\uff1a
It is not always true that a good picture is worth a thousand words. Often writing is much clearer than a picture. It is sometimes difficult to figure out what a picture means\uff0c but a careful writer can almost always explain it.
\u6bb5\u9996\u53e5\u6240\u8868\u8fbe\u7684\u4e3b\u9898\u601d\u60f3\u662f\u4e00\u79cd\u770b\u6cd5\uff0c\u5fc5\u987b\u6709\u5177\u4f53\u4e8b\u4f8b\u52a0\u4ee5\u9a8c\u8bc1\u3002\u4e0a\u8ff0\u4e24\u4e2a\u63a8\u5c55\u53e5\u53ea\u662f\u5728\u6587\u5b57\u4e0a\u5bf9\u4e3b\u9898\u4f5c\u4e9b\u89e3\u91ca\uff0c\u6574\u4e2a\u6bb5\u843d\u5185\u5bb9\u7a7a\u6d1e\uff0c\u7b80\u800c\u4e0d\u660e\u3002\u5982\u679c\u7528\u4e00\u4e24\u4e2a\u5177\u4f53\u7684\u4f8b\u5b50\u7684\u8bdd\uff0c\u5c31\u53ef\u4ee5\u628a\u4e3b\u9898\u89e3\u91ca\u6e05\u695a\u4e86\u3002\u6bd4\u5982\u4e0b\u6bb5\uff1a
It is not always true that a picture is worth a thousand words. Sometimes\uff0c pictures are pretty useless things. If you can't swim and fall in the river and start gulping water\uff0c will you be better off to hold up a picture of yourself drowning\uff0c or start screaming \u201cHelp\u201d\uff1f
3\u3001\u8fde\u8d2f\u6027\uff08coherence\uff09
\u8fde\u8d2f\u6027\u5305\u62ec\u610f\u8fde\u548c\u5f62\u8fde\u4e24\u4e2a\u65b9\u9762\uff0c\u524d\u8005\u6307\u7684\u662f\u5185\u5728\u7684\u903b\u8f91\u6027\uff0c\u540e\u8005\u6307\u7684\u662f\u4f7f\u7528\u8f6c\u6362\u8bcd\u8bed\u3002\u5f53\u7136\u8fd9\u4e24\u8005\u5e38\u5e38\u662f\u4e0d\u53ef\u5206\u5272\u7684\u3002\u53ea\u6709\u5f62\u8fde\u800c\u6ca1\u6709\u610f\u8fde\uff0c\u53e5\u5b50\u4e4b\u95f4\u5c31\u6ca1\u6709\u5185\u5728\u7684\u6709\u673a\u7684\u8054\u7cfb\uff1b\u53cd\u4e4b\uff0c\u53ea\u6709\u610f\u8fde\u800c\u6ca1\u6709\u5f62\u8fde\uff0c\u6709\u65f6\u884c\u6587\u5c31\u4e0d\u591f\u6d41\u7545\u3002
1\uff09\u3001\u610f\u8fde
\u6bb5\u843d\u4e2d\u53e5\u5b50\u7684\u6392\u5217\u5e94\u9075\u5faa\u4e00\u5b9a\u7684\u6b21\u5e8f\uff0c\u4e0d\u80fd\u60f3\u5230\u4ec0\u4e48\u5c31\u5199\u4ec0\u4e48\u3002\u5982\u679c\u5728\u4e0b\u7b14\u4e4b\u524d\u6ca1\u6709\u6784\u601d\uff0c\u8fb9\u5199\u8fb9\u60f3\uff0c\u5199\u5199\u505c\u505c\uff0c\u90a3\u5c31\u5199\u4e0d\u51fa\u4e00\u6c14\u5475\u6210\u7684\u597d\u6587\u7ae0\u6765\u3002\u4e0b\u9762\u4ecb\u7ecd\u51e0\u79cd\u5e38\u89c1\u7684\u6392\u5217\u65b9\u5f0f\u3002
A.\u6309\u65f6\u95f4\u5148\u540e\u6392\u5217\uff08chronological arrangement\uff09
We had a number of close calls that day. When we rose\uff0c it was obviously late and we had to hurry so as not to miss breakfast\uff1b we knew the dining room staff was strict about closing at nine o'clock. Then\uff0c when we had been driving in the desert for nearly two hours \u2014\u2014 it must have been close to noon \u2014\u2014 the heat nearly hid us in\uff1b the radiator boiled over and we had to use most of our drinking water to cool it down. By the time we reached the mountain\uff0c it was our o'clock and we were exhausted. Here\uff0c judgement ran out of us and we started the tough climb to the summit\uff0c not realizing that darkness came suddenly in the desert. Sure enough\uff0c by six we were struggling and Andrew very nearly went down a steep cliff\uff0c dragging Mohammed and me along with him. By nine\uff0c when the wind howled across the flat ledge of the summit\uff0c we knew as we shivered together for warmth that it had not been our lucky day.
\u672c\u6bb5\u4ece\u201crose\u201d\uff08\u8d77\u5e8a\uff09\u5199\u8d77\uff0c\u7136\u540e\u662f\u5403\u65e9\u9910\uff08\u201cnot to miss breakfast\u201d\uff0c \u201cclosing at nine o'clock\u201d\uff09\uff0c\u7136\u540e\u662f\u201cclose to noon\u201d\uff0c\u4e00\u76f4\u5199\u5230\u8fd9\u4e00\u5929\u7ed3\u675f\uff08\u201cBy nine\u2014\u2014\u201d\uff09\u3002
B. \u6309\u4f4d\u7f6e\u8fdc\u8fd1\u6392\u5217\uff08spatial arrangement\uff09\u3002\u4f8b\u5982\uff1a
From a distance\uff0c it looked like a skinny tube\uff0c but as we got closer\uff0c we could see it flesh out before our eyes. It was tubular\uff0c all right\uff0c but fatter than we could see from far away. Furthermore\uff0c we were also astonished to notice that the building was really in two parts\uff1a a pagoda sitting on top of a tubular one-story structure. Standing ten feet away\uff0c we could marvel at how much of the pagoda was made up of glass windows. Almost everything under the wonderful Chinese roof was made of glass\uff0c unlike the tube that it was sitting on\uff0c which only had four. Inside\uff0c the tube was gloomy\uff0c because of the lack of light. Then a steep\uff0c narrow staircase took us up inside the pagoda and the light changed dramatically. All those windows let in a flood of sunshine and we could see out for miles across the flat land.
\u672c\u6bb5\u7684\u5199\u6cd5\u662f\u7531\u8fdc\u53ca\u8fd1\uff0c\u4ece\u8fdc\u5904\uff08\u201cfrom a distance\u201d\uff09\u5199\u8d77\uff0c\u7136\u540e\u201cget closer\u201d\uff0c\u518d\u5230\uff08\u201cten feet away\u201d\uff09\uff0c\u6700\u540e\u662f\u201cinside the pagoda\u201d\u2026\u2026\u5f53\u7136\uff0c\u6309\u4f4d\u7f6e\u8fdc\u8fd1\u6765\u5199\u4e0d\u7b49\u4e8e\u90fd\u662f\u7531\u8fdc\u53ca\u8fd1\u3002\u6839\u636e\u9700\u8981\uff0c\u4e5f\u53ef\u4ee5\u7531\u8fd1\u53ca\u8fdc\uff0c\u7531\u8868\u53ca\u91cc\u7b49\u7b49\u3002
C. \u6309\u903b\u8f91\u5173\u7cfb\u6392\u5217\uff08logical arrangement\uff09
a. \u6309\u91cd\u8981\u6027\u987a\u5e8f\u6392\u5217\uff08arrangement in order of importance\uff09
If you work as a soda jerker\uff0c you will\uff0c of course\uff0c not need much skill in expressing yourself to be effective. If you work on a machine\uff0c your ability to express yourself will be of little importance. But as soon as you move one step up from the bottom\uff0c your effectiveness depends on your ability to reach others through the spoken or the written word. And the further away your job is from manual work\uff0c the larger the organization of which you are an employee\uff0c the more important it will be that you know how to convey your thoughts in writing or speaking. In the very large business organization\uff0c whether it is the government\uff0c the large corporation\uff0c or the Army\uff0c this ability to express oneself is perhaps the most important of all the skills a man can possess.
\u8fd9\u4e00\u6bb5\u8c08\u7684\u662f\u8868\u8fbe\u80fd\u529b\uff0c\u5b83\u7684\u91cd\u8981\u6027\u4e0e\u804c\u4e1a\uff0c\u8eab\u4efd\u6709\u5173\uff0c\u4ece\u201cnot need much skill\u201d\u6216\u201cof little importance\u201d\u5230\u201cmore important\u201d\uff0c\u6700\u540e\u662f\u201cmost important\u201d\u3002
b.\u7531\u4e00\u822c\u5230\u7279\u6b8a\u6392\u5217\uff08general-to-specific arrangement\uff09
If a reader is lost\uff0c it is generally because the writer has not been careful enough to keep him on the path. This carelessness can take any number of forms. Perhaps a sentence is so excessively cluttered that the reader\uff0c hacking his way through the verbiage\uff0c simply doesn't know what it means. Perhaps a sentence has been so shoddily constructed that the reader could read it in any of several ways. Perhaps the writer has switched tenses\uff0c or has switched pronouns in mid-sentence\uff0c so the reader loses track of when the action took place or who is talking. Perhaps sentence B is not logical sequel to sentence A \u2014\u2014 the writer\uff0c in whose head the connection is clear\uff0c has not bothered to provide the missing link. Perhaps the writer has used an important word incorrectly by not taking the trouble to look it up. He may think that \u201csanguine\u201d and \u201csanguinary\u201d mean the same thing\uff0c but the difference is a bloody big one. The reader can only infer what the writer is trying to imply.
\u8fd9\u4e00\u6bb5\u8c08\u7684\u662fa writer's carelessness\uff0c\u5148\u7ed9\u51fa\u4e00\u4e2ageneral statement\u4f5c\u4e3a\u4e3b\u9898\u53e5\uff0c\u7136\u540e\u901a\u8fc75\u4e2a \u201dperhaps\u201d\u52a0\u4ee5\u4f8b\u8bc1\u3002
c. \u7531\u7279\u6b8a\u5230\u4e00\u822c\u6392\u5217\uff08specific-to-general arrangement\uff09
I do not understand why people confuse my Siamese cat\uff0c Prissy\uff0c with the one I had several years ago\uff0c Henry. The two cats are only alike in breed. Prissy\uff0c a quiet\uff0c feminine feline\uff0c loves me dearly but not possessively. She likes to keep her distance from people\uff0c exert her independence and is never so rude as to beg\uff0c lick\uff0c or sniff unceremoniously. Her usual posture is sitting upright\uff0c eyes closed\uff0c perfectly still. Prissy is a very proper cat. Henry\uff0c on the other hand\uff0c loved me dearly but possessively. He was my shadow from morning till night. He expected me to constantly entertain him. Henry never cared who saw him do anything\uff0c whether it was decorous or not\uff0c and he usually offended my friends in some way. The cat made himself quite comfortable\uff0c on the top of the television\uff0c across stranger's feet or laps\uff0c in beds\uff0c drawers\uff0c sacks\uff0c closets\uff0c or nooks. The difference between them is imperceptible to strangers.
\u672c\u6bb5\u7684\u4e3b\u9898\u53e5\u662f\u6bb5\u9996\u53e5\uff0c\u5b83\u4ec5\u63d0\u51fa\u4e00\u4e2a\u95ee\u9898\uff1a\u4e3a\u4ec0\u4e48\u4e24\u53ea\u732b\u4f1a\u88ab\u641e\u6df7\u3002\u7136\u540e\u5bf9\u4e24\u8005\u8fdb\u884c\u6bd4\u8f83\uff0c\u672b\u53e5\u624d\u4e0b\u7ed3\u8bba\u3002
2\uff09\u3001\u5f62\u8fde
\u884c\u6587\u7684\u903b\u8f91\u6027\u5e38\u5e38\u8981\u9760\u9002\u5f53\u7684\u8f6c\u6362\u8bcd\u8bed\u53ca\u5176\u4ed6\u624b\u6bb5\u6765\u5b9e\u73b0\u3002\u8bf7\u8bfb\u4e0b\u9762\u8fd9\u4e00\u6bb5\u6587\u5b57\u5e76\u627e\u51fa\u6587\u4e2d\u7528\u4ee5\u627f\u4e0a\u542f\u4e0b\u7684\u8bcd\u8bed\uff1a
Walter's goal in life was to become a successful surgeon. First\uff0c though\uff0c he had to get through high school\uff0c so he concentrated all his efforts on his studies \u2014\u2014 in particular\uff0c biology\uff0c chemistry\uff0c and math. Because he worked constantly on these subjects\uff0c Walter became proficient in them\uff1b however\uff0c Walter forgot that he needed to master other subjects besides those he had chosen. As a result\uff0c during his junior year of high school\uff0c Walter failed both English and Latin. Consequently\uff0c he had to repeat these subjects and he was almost unable to graduate on schedule. Finally\uff0c on June 6\uff0c Walter achieved the first step toward realizing his goal.
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Speaking and writing are different in many ways. Speech depends on sounds\uff1b writing\uff0c on the other hand\uff0c uses written symbols. Speech was developed about 500 000 years ago\uff0c but written language is a recent development\uff0c invented only about six thousand years ago. Speech is usually informal\uff0c while the word choice of writing\uff0c by contrast\uff0c is often relatively formal. Although pronunciation and accent often tell where the speaker is from\uff0c they are ignored in wiring because a standard diction and spelling system prevails in most countries. Speech relies on gesture\uff0c loudness\uff0c and the rise and fall of the voice\uff0c but writing lacks these features. Careful speakers and writers are aware of the differences.
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In the movie\uff0c Robert Redford was a spy. He goes to his office where he found everybody dead. Other spies wanted to kill him\uff0c so he takes refuge with Julie Christie. At her house\uff0c he had waited for the heat to die down\uff0c but they come after him anyway.
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Everybody looks for satisfaction in his life. They want to be happy. But if he seeks only pleasure in the short run\uff0c the person will soon run out of pleasure and life will catch up to him. They need to pursue the deeper pleasure of satisfaction in work and in relationships.
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Now more than ever\uff0c parents need to be in touch with their children's activities because modern life has the tendency to cause cleavages in the family. You need to arrange family like it so that family members will do things together and know one another. You need to give up isolated pleasures of your own and realize that parents have a set of obligations to sponsor togetherness and therefore sponsor knowledge.
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Study Plan
At the beginning of this term, I made a plan for my study. Now, I find that I carry it out well in the past month. I was poor in Chinese and English last semester. Therefore, I put the two subjects in the priority and I spent much time on them. Happily, I made progress in the two subjects this semester. Besides, math and physics is not so hard for me, but I must do many exercises to improve my knowledge. Half of an hour for each is necessary and I have always been doing so. The other subjects are easy for me. As long as I carefully listen to the teacher in the class and do some reviews, I can do well in them. While, it does not mean that I attach no importance to them. I make plan for my study to ensure the efficiency of my study.
写作思路：不会跑题，写作“我”身边最尊敬的人，可以写钟南山院士，钟南山院士面对非典和新冠疫情毫不退缩，奋不顾身勇往直前，这种忘我的精神是值得所有人尊敬的。
正文：
大年三十与往常一样喜气洋洋，各家各户张灯结彩，准备着年夜饭，忙碌的身影里渗透着新年的快乐。
不知何时，家人开始讨论了起来，一个我没有听过的词飘进了我耳朵里----新型冠状病毒。我忍不住查了查手机，原来这个可怕的病毒已经使全国人心惶惶，而钟南山院士也正是此时映入了我的眼帘------一个瞬间让我由陌生到尊敬的人。
早在17年前，钟院士就在SARS病毒事件中就临危受命，当时的他请缨“将最危重的病人送到我们这里来”，创下了最高的非典危重病人抢救成功率，更是在自己的岗位上做到了最好。面对全国媒体的长枪短炮，他坚决不说空话套话，字字属实，一针见血。
很快，我国抗击非典战役在钟南山院士的领导下打开了新的局面，他以精湛的医学技术和必胜的信念，成为非典战场上的不倒“红旗”，为国家立下汗马功劳。
在当下大流行的冠状病毒下，人们再次把求助的目光投向钟南山。1月20日历史或将记住，对于武汉的肺炎防控，这是具有转折意义的一天。
“肯定存在人传人，14名医务人员感染，病毒可能来自野味。”
是钟老改变了人们对新冠状病毒的认知，也在很大程度上改变了如今的局面。然而此时的钟老已经84岁了。在新闻里在视频上，我看到这位鞠躬尽瘁的老人，面对资源短缺，人传人的种种问题，不顾高年老腿，不避风险，英勇冲锋打头阵，日夜奔走一线，采访中句句指出病毒源头和处置方案。
时隔17年，在最危急的时刻，依然是他站在公众面前，布满血丝的双眼目光灼灼，向人们传递出必胜的信念！
不会跑题。
写作思路：我身边最尊敬的人是可以写钟南山院士的，钟南山院士奋不顾身，勇往直前冲向第一线，84岁的高龄，面对疫情毫不退缩，这种精神值得所有人尊敬。
正文：
I have a lot of respect for people. This epidemic in Wuhan is spreading. I respect those working in the front line of epidemic prevention. I also respect academician Zhong Nanshan, who is 84 years old.
我尊敬的人有很多，这次武汉疫情蔓延，我尊敬那些奋战在防疫前线的工作人员，我更尊敬84岁高龄的钟南山院士。
When SARS broke out in 2003 and people were in panic, Zhong Nanshan, an academician of the Chinese Academy of engineering and an expert in respiratory diseases, came to the front line. He was worthy of being a leading figure in the prevention and control of respiratory infectious diseases in China.
Regardless of his own life danger, Zhong Nanshan was given the honorary title of "anti non hero" by Guangzhou City in 2003.
在2003年非典疫情爆发，人们恐慌之际，中国工程院院士，呼吸病学专家钟南山来到前线，他无愧中国呼吸系统传染病防治的领军人物，不顾自身的生命危险治疗重病人与死神夺生命，2003年，钟南山被广州市赋予“抗非英雄”的荣誉称号。
英语作文写作技巧：
1.审题，条理清楚 保证不跑提示写作当中第一任务，第二个重要任务就是要做到条理清楚。对于议论文来说，正反面要清楚，对于说明文来说条理要清楚...
2.写主题句 主题句是确保不跑题的前提，只有不跑题才有可得及格分。写主题句嘴保险的方法就是把中文提纲的各句译成英语。
3.问题阐述适当用被动替换主动，这样能更客观地反映事实。
4.一句话用不同的句式来表达 为了加强同学们对语法知识在写作中的灵活应用
5.尽量复杂作文中的句式，长句采用的特殊语法包括：宾语从句+分词结构做插入语+分词作后置定语（issued）+被动语态+原因短语+定语从句。
钟南山就是你身边最尊敬的人，不会跑题。
我跟你写的一样，考完才反应过来，急死我了😭
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