帮我看下有没语法错误
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She is armed to teeth, seeming that she is going to deal with corrosive acid. \u4e3b\u53e5\u662fshe is armed to teeth\u5fc5\u987b\u8bed\u6cd5\u5b8c\u6574\uff0c\u56e0\u4e3a\u8fd9\u662f\u4e2d\u5fc3\u610f\u601d\uff0cseeming....\u5206\u8bcd\u7ed3\u6784\u4f5c\u72b6\u8bed\u3002
I will strive and fight for success 改为 I will stive to success更好！can further the standard of English further改为meet the standard
什么是English race？
再改一下 The English Premier League match gives me a very good opportunity which allow me to show myself
I very much hope that participate in the English race改为 I look forward to partticipating in the English race!
I wish good luck. 改为 Good luck to me!
我觉得改成这样更有英语味道！ 见笑了！
As an English fan, I look forward to partticipating in the English race!The English Premier League match gives me a very good opportunity which allow me to show myself, I can meet the standard of English. I will strive to success. Good luck to me!
差不多吧，不过那个very much hope-->very hope 感觉好些，very much 感觉别扭啊，呵呵，可以i very hope to participate in ``````
he will allow me to ``````--->it will````好些吧?
大概就这些了，你看看其他的人怎么说吧，祝你好运~~！
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