请帮忙修改一下英语作文
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is coming=is around the corner
are traveling around \u867d\u7136\u53ef\u4ee5\u8868\u793a\u5c06\u8981\u505a\u4ec0\u4e48\u3002\u4e0d\u8fc7\u6211\u4eec\u4e00\u822c\u7528be going to \u53e5\u578b\u3002\u53ef\u4ee5\u8bf4\uff1aare planning to travel outside or are going to travel around.
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First of all,I give my sduty top priority.(\u628a\u5b66\u4e60\u653e\u5728\u7b2c\u4e00\u4f4d\uff09\u2026\u2026
Besize,I think it is also quite valuable to spend my holiday time on some housework.\u2026\u2026
Finally,I am going to spare some time to do physical exercise,which can help build my body and I can also find a lot of fun in the process.
This picture shows a cellphone on a pair of hands.The cellphone is commented TO BE not the original edition.That means many people steal others' technoleDge and produce products WHICH ARE not the original edition.They sell those cellphoneS at low priceS in THE market ,AND THIS bringS a lot of loss IN BOTH CUSTOMERS AND INCOME to the original edition company who has the right of PRODUCING the products .
This phenomenon is very common. THE government haD made many policies to stop this kind of phenomenon before. But it looks LIKE this phenomenon is Still aCTIve . I hope not only our government but also everyone of our society will TRY TO stop this bad phenomenon too. Let us respect others's brain, KNOWLEDGE AND hard work ,and let us make a harmonius society like a warm family .
2，“in nowadays”，改为“now”就行了，不要太复杂,因为前面没有写“history”。
3，在第二段开始的那句中“say”应改为过去式“said”，因为是已经说了的话。
4，最后一句中的“rather than”意思是：与其...倒不如...，建议您去掉“rather” ，因为在前面已经有个“more”，在句中已是比较级了。
Going on a diet
Many years ago,people ddi not have enough food to eat.They could not imagine that human beings would go on a diet nowadays.It is a joke.But this situation really exists in our daily life .A lot of girls refuse to eat meat in order to lose weight .They think that “the less weight,the more beauty”.Pelple have different views about it . Some support it ,while others disagree with it.
An old saying goes “Everybody has the mind of beauty”. However,going on a diet too much is harmful to our health.Fat,meat,sugar and so on are important to keep the balance of our body. If we don’t take them for a long time ,we will be lack of nutrition ,and won't have enough energy for study or work.What’s more , we may get stomach disease if we eat much less.
All in all,healthy is more important than the so-called beauty.
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