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When I was young,
my homesickness was a small stamp,
I was here,
my mother was there.
After growing up,
my homesickness was a narrow ticket,
I was here,
my bride was there.
Later,
my homesickness was a little tomb,
I was outside,
my mother was inside.
And now,
my homesickness is a shallow strait,
I am here,
the mainland is there.
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2. 设问的运用，每个自然段中都会用一个问句说“知道我要做什么吗？”然后马上又给出答案，读起来轻松活泼。
3. 排比段的运用，文章在写到五个梦想时，结构基本一致，构成排比段，让文章结构清晰明了，读起来也朗朗上口。
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