2013年考研英语小作文。帮我看看大致能得多少分？
满分20分的话，能得10-13分。首先，阅卷老师先看到的是开头。英文信件的标准开头是：Dear ...., 一般不用hi
其次，正文的第一句不用介绍自己是谁，直接切入主题。因为对方收到你的信，就知道你是谁，你的职务，所以不用在开头赘述。
中间段写的不错，中间段最要注意的是单词拼写。
另外，最后一段也是老师比较喜欢看的。第一个forward ....可以改为inform / notify this message to your friends. 还有，your guys arrived sincerely 应该改为you guys‘ coming. look forword to 后面应该加名词形式。
最后，结尾，英语中最常用的是：Yours, 或者是Yours sincerely, 或者是 Yours faithfully. 你用的那个awesomely一般不用到，如果碰上有些老师不习惯用那个，那你的作文分肯定就低了。
写的不错，祝你考研成功！加油！
满分50分的话，能得40分。
百分之60.。
说实话，那些小错误就会让你分被扣光的。。。
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