2011年12月的英语四级作文我写了放弃吸烟,吸烟有害这些类型的。 走题了,请问我这样会有多少分?
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你看过作文评分标准么,怎么说虽然你是跑题了,但是也不至于是随便乱写,或者直接抄上阅读一类的,所以只要老师不是极端变态的苛刻,你能有33的保底小分,在评分标准最低就是33分。也就条理不清,思维紊乱,语言支离破碎或大部分句子有错误,且有严重错误。我也是和你一样的跑题了,要是作文能给30分我就能过,所以咱们只能起到老师不要太苛刻了,还有就是今年的作文比较难,老师们应该会把要求降低点。咱们一起起到哇~~~~希望都能过。我根本就没写关于烟的,我写的是获得成功需要努力什么的就是按模版那种写想要获得成功的方法。郁闷,还自我感觉良好呢,结果回来一讨论,人家都写的议论文,怎么办呢
没什么太明显的走题就只能得一半多一两分吧,要看你单词写得对不对,写得好不好,如果彻底走题,就只能拿三四分的样子
悲剧,我也写的放弃吸烟,完蛋了!
百分制,写的好六分左右,
我跟你一样....你有提到有意志才可以戒烟吗
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