帮我看看这篇关于魏晨的英语短文有没有错
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I\u2019ve heard like vanilla ice cream person like him. Because he also gives us the vision and the taste are double happiness.
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My favorite star is a great singer and actor. His name is Vision Wei.
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He is cute and a little shy before.But now,he has a new look.
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From he in The Super Boys Singing Competition to the first album Leave No Stone Unturned. In the past three years, Vision form a sunny boy grows into the ripe and fashionable male.
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He has only one motto is I will try my best to prove myself.
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He knows thanksgiving.
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He always very care about his fans.
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He always said he was very good, any grievances were himself bear.
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Each holiday and our commemoration day,he tried to give us his best wishes.
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He asked for delay the the first EP publicity. Because he wanted his fans to study first.
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The drama ends, Vision walked the last and gave the flowers to the chair of Happy Orange.He said,\u201dThe flowers use again tomorrow. Otherwise you have to spend a lot of money.\u201d
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He always told us, \u201cDay after day in the air-conditioned room is not good for your body.When the weather cool down to open the window. Reduction drink drinks and drink more chrysanthemum tea and water.\u201d
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He said,\u201dHappy is the most important.Tell yourself that you are optimist.\u201d
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If without Vision, I don\u2019t know the world is so beautiful. He just smile instead of everythings.
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I thirk have a such idol is motivity to me.
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Do you like vanilla ice cream\uff1f
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I\u2019ve heard like vanilla ice cream person like him. Because he also gives us the vision and the taste are double happiness.
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My favorite star is a great singer and actor. His name is Vision Wei.
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He is cute and a little shy before.But now,he has a new look.
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From he in The Super Boys Singing Competition to the first album Leave No Stone Unturned. In the past three years, Vision form a sunny boy grows into the ripe and fashionable male.
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Do you like vanilla ice cream\uff1f
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I\u2019ve heard like vanilla ice cream person like him. Because he also gives us the vision and the taste are double happiness.
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My favorite star is a great singer and actor. His name is Vision Wei.
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He is cute and a little shy before.But now,he has a new look.
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From he in The Super Boys Singing Competition to the first album Leave No Stone Unturned. In the past three years, Vision form a sunny boy grows into the ripe and fashionable male.
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He has only one motto is I will try my best to prove myself.
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He knows thanksgiving.
\u4ed6\u61c2\u5f97\u611f\u6069\u3002
He always very care about his fans.
\u4ed6\u603b\u662f\u975e\u5e38\u5728\u4e4e\u4ed6\u7684\u7c89\u4e1d\u3002
He always said he was very good, any grievances were himself bear.
\u4ed6\u603b\u662f\u8bf4\u4ed6\u5f88\u597d\uff0c\u4efb\u4f55\u59d4\u5c48\u90fd\u81ea\u5df1\u627f\u53d7\u3002
Each holiday and our commemoration day,he tried to give us his best wishes.
\u6bcf\u4e00\u4e2a\u8282\u65e5\u548c\u6211\u4eec\u7684\u7eaa\u5ff5\u65e5\uff0c\u4ed6\u90fd\u52aa\u529b\u7684\u7ed9\u6211\u4eec\u9001\u4e0a\u4ed6\u7684\u795d\u798f\u3002
He asked for delay the the first EP publicity. Because he wanted his fans to study first.
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The drama ends, Vision walked the last and gave the flowers to the chair of Happy Orange.He said,\u201dThe flowers use again tomorrow. Otherwise you have to spend a lot of money.\u201d
\u5728\u8bdd\u5267\u7ed3\u675f\u540e\uff0c\u9b4f\u6668\u8d70\u5728\u6700\u540e\u9762\u5e76\u628a\u82b1\u7ed9\u7c89\u4e1d\u4f1a\u4f1a\u957f\uff0c\u4ed6\u8bf4\uff0c\u8fd9\u4e2a\u82b1\u660e\u5929\u518d\u7528\uff0c\u8981\u4e0d\u4f60\u4eec\u53c8\u8981\u82b1\u5f88\u591a\u94b1\u3002
He always told us, \u201cDay after day in the air-conditioned room is not good for your body.When the weather cool down to open the window. Reduction drink drinks and drink more chrysanthemum tea and water.\u201d
\u4ed6\u603b\u662f\u544a\u8bc9\u6211\u4eec\uff0c\u6574\u5929\u5446\u5728\u7a7a\u8c03\u623f\u91cc\u5bf9\u8eab\u4f53\u4e0d\u597d\uff0c\u5f53\u5929\u6c14\u53d8\u51c9\u7684\u65f6\u5019\u5c31\u6253\u5f00\u7a97\u6237\u3002\u5c3d\u91cf\u5c11\u548c\u6c7d\u6c34\uff0c\u591a\u559d\u83ca\u82b1\u8336\u548c\u6c34\u3002
He said,\u201dHappy is the most important.Tell yourself that you are optimist.\u201d
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If without Vision, I don\u2019t know the world is so beautiful. He just smile instead of everythings.
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I thirk have a such idol is motivity to me.
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vision is a person who singing very well
=vision is a person who sings very well
for example he will ask his fans study hard
=for example he will ask his fans to study hard
i love he very much =.i love him very much
i hope you can love him. = i hope you will love him too.
有点语法错误。 都是楽橙，帮忙这下吧、
i hope you can love him. ???
我认为改成
i hope you will love him too!
fell改成feel.还有he has a little cool改成he is a little cool.还有句子中的小写的i都要改成大写的I。
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