英语自我介绍，望达人纠错指正，不甚感激。
\u6c42\u82f1\u6587\u7ea0\u9519\uff0c\u6307\u6b63Inappropriate handling of this matter might lead to greater anger in the next incident.
But they might change their mind as a result and the anger would just disappear.
Good morning. I am glad to be here for this interview. First let me introduce myself.\u52a0\u4e0a\u8fd9\u4e00\u53e5\uff0c\u8981\u4e0d\u7136\uff0c\u76f4\u63a5\u4ecb\u7ecd\u592a\u5510\u7a81\u4e86\u3002
My hometown is taian city ,which is a beautiful city in shangdong province .\u4f60\u76f4\u63a5\u8bf4\u5c71\u4e1c\u4e0d\u597d\uff0c\u8303\u56f4\u592a\u5927\u3002
successfully accomplished a social science research which entitled privatization of public utilities and social equity. \u8fd9\u4e00\u53e5\u611f\u89c9\u592a\u957f\uff0c\u800c\u4e14\u5355\u8bcd\u4e0d\u597d\u8bfb\uff0c\u5982\u679c\u53d1\u97f3\u4e0d\u597d\uff0c\u8001\u5e08\u53ef\u80fd\u4e0d\u4f1a\u660e\u767d\u5b83\u7684\u610f\u601d\u3002\u614e\u7528(\u53ef\u4ee5\u8bf4\u7684\u6162\u4e00\u70b9)\u6216\u4fee\u6539\u3002
\u4e25\u8c28\u7684\u5b66\u672f\u6001\u5ea6 rigorous academic attitudes\u3002scholarship\u4e0d\u884c\u3002
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If luckily I got the chance to learn environment engineering in Tongji University,I will concentrate on the study and research in this field. First,I will learn the theoretical knowledge deeply ,constructing a solid base for my future work\uff1bSecond,I would like to do some practical work with the help of my professor and classmates. And through this,I can get something that cannot be acquired from the textbooks. I believe after 2 years of learning,my dream will finally come true\u2026\u2026
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应加上主语 I'm 23years old.
2.I studied in jiangnan University. It offers me a chance to develop my abilities. During my college years， I learned a lot .
I studied in jiangnan University.It provided me with opportunities to gain abilities.I've learned a lot during the college time.
3,I am no one special, just a common man with common thoughts.
I'm not a special man and just have common thoughts.
4.Two things fill the mind with ever-increasing wonder and awe, the more often and the more intensely the mind of thought is drawn to them: the starry heavens above me and the moral law within me.
fill 改成filling
drawn to改成drawing to
5. think about life.I think about human.I think everything arround me.
最后一个也该是与前部分一致 think about
6.Philosophy is interesting.I love it.
句子结构太简单 对于面试我个人认为没有突出特长
I love Philosophy ,though many people think it's too difficult,I find it interesting.That's what i differ from others.
7.建议最后加上一句 。Thanks for your listening.
I studied in jiangnan University.it offered me a chance……
I am not special, just a common man with common thoughts.
……
OK.That's all.thanks.
└(^o^)┘加油哦，自我介绍自信最重要哦
It offers me a chance to develop my abilities...改说improve my abilities
I am no one special...改成 I'm not special...或者 I have nothing special...前者是说自己没什么特别，后者是说自己没什么特长...你看你更适合哪个
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