有谁能帮我完善一下这段翻译？是论文的摘要
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The fast development of the computer and the internet has promoted the growth of both the basic and the major education on computers.Many schools built the computer room,but due to the various using level of the students,the over-use of the computers,or the bad quality of the hardwear,it brought about some bad effects to the management of the computer room and the imformation technology education.Through the survey on many schools' conditions,with classifying and analysing,we found the countermeasures for these schools to have a reference in order to improve the condition of the computer rooms,and the education quality.
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从翻译中可以看出你已经理解了摘要的意思，也就是说没有误解。唯一一个明显需要修改的地方是最后一句，which is largely due to the same economic function你翻译成"由于相同的经济目标",个人认为翻译成“很大程度上由于商业功用比较相似”会更加合理一些。
剩下的就是汉语表达习惯方面的问题了。比如第二段第一句，广告的繁荣发展，我觉得翻译成广告业的繁荣发展可能会更好。还是第二段，adopts concrete and familiar concepts to describe abstract and unfamiliar areas of experience，可以翻译为 隐喻通过消费者熟悉的具体的概念，以一种消费者更加容易理解的方式，向客户描述了抽象陌生的消费体验。
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