请帮我看看这片文章有没有语法错误呢？谢谢啦 帮我看看这篇文章有没有语法错误？表达不好之处
\u8bf7\u5e2e\u6211\u770b\u770b\u8fd9\u7bc7\u6587\u7ae0\u6709\u65e0\u8bed\u6cd5\u9519\u8bef\uff1f\u7b2c\u4e00\u884cgood afternoon
\u7b2c\u4e09\u884cspeeches
\u7b2c\u56db\u884cbut\u6362\u6210and \u56e0\u4e3a\u6ca1\u8f6c\u6298\u610f\u601d
so let's be more excited now\u8fd9\u53e5\u4e0d\u77e5\u9053\u4f60\u8981\u8868\u8fbe\u4ec0\u4e48
you must fought it\u4e0d\u592a\u597d \u4f60\u662f\u8981\u8bf4\u201c\u4f60\u4eec\u4e00\u5b9a\u611f\u89c9\u5230\u4e86\u5427\uff01\u201d\u5417 you may feel that
Iam : i am
playing badminton, playing pingping ball \u540e\u9762\u7684playing\u53ef\u4ee5\u4e0d\u8981\u4e86\uff0c\u4ee5\u514d\u91cd\u590d
sometimes i am going to swim\u8fd9\u662f\u4e00\u822c\u73b0\u5728\u65f6\u4e0d\u7528\u4e00\u822c\u5c06\u6765\u65f6sometimes i go to swim
i thought a true chinese need not english at all. \u4f60\u662f\u8981\u8bf4\u8981\u4e0d\u8981\u82f1\u6587\u540d\u5b57\u4e0d\u91cd\u8981\u5417\uff1fi thought a english name is not necessary as we are chinese
pretend to loving it\u611f\u89c9\u6709\u70b9\u522b\u626d\uff0c\u6211\u4e5f\u4e0d\u77e5\u9053\u662f\u4e0d\u65f6\u7528-ing\u5f62\u5f0f\uff0c\u4f60\u518d\u67e5\u4e00\u4e0b\u55bd\uff01
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\u697c\u4e3b\u5f97\u6ce8\u610f\u52a8\u8bcd\u53d8\u683c\uff01\uff01\u5355\u6570\uff0c\u590d\u6570\uff01
Was ist Crazy? Die Jugend macht immer dies und das ,was Crazy ist. Wenn wir reifer werden, vergessen wir nach und nach diese Crazy. Als man den Roman Crazy liest, muss man noch mal \u00fcberlegen. Man kann tiefer verstehen\uff08\u8fd8\u662f eingehender \u6216 gr\u00fcndlicher\u5427\uff0ctiefer \u4e0d\u8fd9\u4e48\u8bf4\uff09, die Jugend ist\uff08\u8fd8\u662f\u697c\u4e3b\u60f3\u8bf4 die Jugendlichen?!\u90a3\u5c31\u662f sind\uff09 flatterig\uff08\u4e2d\u6587\u610f\u601d\uff1f\uff09. Die Jugendlichen denken alles. Sie sind nicht leichtlebig(\u89c9\u5f97\u4e0d\u5e38\u7528\uff0c\u53ef\u4ee5\u662f hemmungslos \u6216 frivol).
Die Abschnitten , die das Abhauen nach M\u00fcnchen beschreiben, sind repräsentativ. Die Jungen\uff08\u7537\u751f\uff1f\uff1f\uff09 verhalten sich unterschiedlich. Aber sie haben auch Gemeinsamkeiten . Auf dem Wege reden sie \u00fcber Leben, Freundschaft, und Fragen wie z.B. ob der Gott uns sieht? Diese Fragen sind sehr groß\uff08\u697c\u4e3b\u60f3\u8bf4\u5565 \u5927\u95ee\u9898\uff1f\uff09. Anscheinend ist alles sehr fern und unsicher. Alles muss nachgedacht werden. Die Jungen sind dreist . Sie haben aber auch gute Gedanken. Sie sind Crazy.
Diese Probleme kommt häufig bei Jugendlichen vor. Es gibt keine deutlichen\uff08\u7528 andeutigen \u5427\uff09 Antworten auf irgendetwas. Die Jugendlichen werden Crazy ,wenn sie wollen.
Der Autor Benjamin Lebert ist sensibel und denkfähig(\u5bf9\u4eba\u4e00\u904d\u4e0d\u7528denkfähig\uff0c\u8bf4\u8bf4\u4e2d\u6587!). Er porträtiert seine Erfahrungen als Halbseitenspastiker und geht auch auf die Probleme des Erwachsenwerdens, der Pubertät,des Neides, der Eifersucht, sowie der Freundschaft und Liebe ein. Benjamin Lebert wollte "einfach irgendwie eine Geschichte erzählen". Nicht nur das ist dem 1982geborenen Jungdichter gelungen. In einfacher, direkter, knapper, frischer Sprache erzeugt er ein atmosphärisch dichtes Szenario der pubertären Einsamkeit und Suche nach Lebenssinn, in dem sich mancher wiedererkennen werden.
Ich hoffe, durch dieser Schlussarbeit kann ich den Roman mehr Leuten\uff08Roman \u7b2c\u56db\u683c\uff0cLeuten \u7b2c\u4e09\u683c\uff01\uff09 vorstellen. Und die jugendliche Literatur ist unserer Aufmerksamkeit wert.
I am writing to ask if you can recommend a foreigner who needs a teacher on Chinese study.
【评点】a teacher on Chinese study (在汉语学习方面的老师) 语法上没错，但是语义有些问题，另外 teacher 不如 tutor 较为妥帖，改为 a tutor to help him/her with his/her Chinese study（帮助他/她学习汉语的老师）。.
I would be much grateful if the foreigner is a young American who is newly to China and interested of Chinese cultures.
【评点】is interested in 而不是 is interested of
My teaching plan will be as follows.
【评点】句号改为冒号
In addition, some easy written words are also the vital part of the teaching job.
【评点】easy written words 语意模糊，改为high frequency word in writing
I hope you can realize my wish my wish to contribute a little in both promoting Mandarin and spreading Chinese culture.
【评点】my wish 重复，删去一个；promoting 含宣传的意思，不如用 popularizing
I appreciate the time you have taken to read my letter and look forward to hearing from you soon.
【评点】用 take to read（喜欢/沉湎于读）不妥。把这look forward to 和appreciate 的顺序调整一下改为：I look forward to your having read my letter and appreciate hearing from you soon（翘望您读过这封信并恭候早日收到佳音）.
全文修改如下（括号中是修改部分）
Dear Sir:
I am writing to ask if you can recommend a foreigner who needs a tutor (to help him/her with his/her Chinese study). I would be much grateful if the foreigner is a young American who is newly to China and interested (in) Chinese cultures. My teaching plan will be as follows: First, I will teach him some common vocabulary used in daily conversation. In addition, some (high frequency words) in writing are also the vital part of the teaching job. I hope you can realize my wish to contribute a little in both (popularizing) Mandarin and spreading Chinese culture. If you find a proper candidate, please contact me. I (look forward to your having read my letter and appreciate) hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li
Dear Sir:
I am writing to ask if you can recommend a foreigner who needs a Chinese to teach him Chinese.
I would be much grateful if the foreigner is a young American who newly came to China and interested in Chinese cultures. My teaching plan will be as follows. First, I will teach him some common words used in daily conversation. In addition, I want to teach him how to write some simple characters.
I hope you can understand my wish. My wish is to dedicate myself a little to both promoting Mandarin and spreading Chinese cultures. If you find such a candidate, please contact me. I appreciate the time you have taken to read my letter and look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li
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