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[作文 第一次被表扬]第一次被表扬 李铸城 星期五的语文课上，黄老师点评了接力日记，作文 第一次被表扬。忽然，我的目光落在了一本接力日记上，我暗暗想，这本日记怎么这么眼熟啊，该不会是我们组的吧？不可能吧？估计是点评前天的作文。这时，黄老师的话揭开了谜底。黄老师说：“这次点评的作文题目叫《打排球》……” 天哪！这不是我的作文嘛！我的心猛烈地跳动起来，双手紧紧地合拢在一起，全身的毛孔都仿佛一瞬间关闭了自己的闸门，还不时地抽搐着，甚至比冬天不穿衣服站在雪地里抖得还厉害，整个心都跳到了嗓子眼，小学一年级作文《作文 第一次被表扬》。这时，老师讲完了作文，并且说要给我三面小红旗！我暗自高兴，走上前去，贴上了那三面满载荣誉的小红旗，那三面小红旗在灯光的映衬下熠熠生辉。在极度的兴奋中，我仿佛看见它们从那堵冰冷的墙上跳下来，在我的周围欢快地跳舞…… 在回家的班车上，我仍沉浸在激动当中，真想一下子飞到家里，将今天发生的一切全都告诉奶奶和妈妈。可是，时间就像蜗牛一样，慢得让人窒息。那时，我真想变成一名魔法师，把时间调快点，或者让班车插上翅膀，我仿佛看到了人群中奶奶那赞许的目光。 这一天，我过得非常开心，因为这是黄老师第一次表扬我，它就像一粒种子，永远地种在我的心田里。 (第一次被表扬，在孩子心里留下了不可磨灭的印象，小作者通过细致地心理描写，展现了孩童的天真与可爱。)希望对你能有所帮助。
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