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\u6c42\uff0c\uff0c\uff0c\uff0c\uff0c\u4f5c\u6587\uff0c\uff0cSince October 11, hunan TV program "where dad" immediately come to a horse by ratings in the fourth quarter of the undisputed dark horse."Dad" why effect instantly across television screens?Cute babies and at a loss, in my opinion, the star of dad, how not to move people's hearts?This program will be so, because it is concerned about the social hot spots of now: a lot of people put the center of gravity of the life in the make more money and the pursuit of fame fortune, and neglect and relationship between family members in the spiritual level.Of course I think the most important still is the program's own innovation.There are many highlights in form, the program.Bright spot is a celebrity fathers will star dads as a selling point caught their loyal fans in the first place.Many people want to know, when the stars in front of the screen to return to real life play the role of a father what happens?The audience is full of expectation.In addition, the audience began to next season which would be a father and his children came to the show with a lot of questions and curious.It is also to ensure the program ratings.Highlight 2 is the most lovely children of children on the show, they won't go to care about their face the camera say, do your own actions.They were real and lovely, they reveal's temperament is not posing in adults.Light said that would be enough to attract the public to love her children.Children make them laugh, let them try so hard, let they touched, let their heart of love.Highlight three is everywhere is love the family, it is a best playing CARDS.In addition, look from the entire program form, it is a matter of exposure to the narrative style to solve the problem.That in itself would be firmly attract the attention of the audience, let it be single-minded sitting in front of the screen.All in all, the show did fire, because it's true.Let us feel love through this program, learn to love.
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夏日的午后，蝉声如织，我独自在家里漫不经心地整理书桌。从一本旧书中蓦然飘落了一张照片，我俯身拾起……热泪又一次浸润了我的眼睛，模糊了我的视线。哎，也不知道你现在怎么样了。照片上的你，笑容依旧灿烂，如冬日阳光般温暖着我。海风把你的秀发吹起，似乎还散发着淡淡的清香，阳光下的你，热情、活泼、洒脱。还记得你临别时说的话：“我很想把最美的一面留给我最hao的朋友。”当我说出：“和朋友促膝相处时，人间最幸福的时光了!”那时，你却抽泣了。我当时感到莫名其妙，百思其解。
那天，我依旧在路口等你一同上学。一分一秒地走过，我感觉就像等过了春夏秋冬，可你一直，我次尝到了你陪伴的漫长和孤单。之后，你的生活很单调，你的路途很寂寞。不知是过了几个“三秋”，我收到了你的来信。
信中，你说：“请原谅我的不辞而别，只不想看到分别时伤心的一幕……顺便寄去我在海边照的一张照片，我想这张照片可以帮我给你带去夏日的清爽。”这次是我哭了，我懊悔，我应该能觉察到你那一段的反常举动。奶奶说过，是从小一起光着屁股长大的，就像孪生姐妹一样。而现在，时空拉开了之间的距离，如今的你身在何方？你还记得咱们家乡的那片小树林吗？那是童年的乐园，是尽情嬉戏的地方。悄悄告诉你：现在小树变大了，前来逗留的鸟儿也多了，清晨数不尽的鸟儿们忘情地展示她们婉转悠扬的歌喉。还记得黄昏夕阳下，一树林里捉知了猴，不知是的到来惊吓到了鸟儿，那些鸟儿故意和逗乐子，她们时而小憩，时而一哄而散，在树林上空飞舞盘旋，不知疲倦地叫啊、飞啊，不肯有片刻的安宁。还记得那条潺潺流淌的小河吗?小河里，一起摸鱼虾，那里面曾留下了你我多少顽皮的笑声和欢快的歌声啊。忘不了那个夏日的午后，一起沿着小河挖河蚌，结果挖得太多，最后是你用外套包了一大包，当满身泥巴的满怀喜悦地回到家时，结果你被妈妈“奖励”了一巴掌……
照片上的你，笑容依旧，清爽依旧。轻轻地收起照片，重新夹在书中，我擦干眼泪，望着窗外，心中默念：我只希望远方的你生活得haohao的，每个夏日有你的照片陪伴，就清爽的！
满分解密：
1.故事美，感情真。关于照片的故事有，但作者却选取了儿时的纯真故事，然后用饱蘸深情的笔触去描绘，读来自有别样的感受。儿时的情景是一段抹不去的记忆，在夏日的午后，作者拾起的不只是一张照片，也拾起了一段真情美hao的往事。
2.富有生活情趣。同样是叙述故事，但本文作者的笔是五彩斑斓的，她笔下的事物是生动逼真的，她叙述的故事是富有的生活情调的。小作者用多彩的文字，给展示了一段富有童真童趣的往事：树林，小鸟，黄昏夕阳下，那对捉知了猴、摸鱼虾、挖河蚌的顽皮小伙伴给留下了的印象。清澈的文字，纯纯的情谊!
你要和我做一次！
娇软的声音仿佛又在耳边响起，CJK那婀娜多姿的身影洛神般幻舞着，我思绪万千……
那是一个风花雪夜的时候吧，我……（以下去街边买本H书照抄一段）
呵呵，相片依旧，伊人芳踪难寻，我低笑着，夹回了相片——问世间情为何物，直教人生死与共……
得分点：够刺激，血气方刚的老师一看了立马给满分，搞不好加多十分！
呵呵，五中的么?写同一篇作文纳~~~~~~~016班还是015班滴？
自己构思你的作文吧，祝你早日解决此问题
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