2023年6月30日雅思写作机经
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权威点评
本次考试难度较低，小作文中出现的柱图难度很低：本图中没有出现时态变化，同时数据本身可以有多种途径完成分析。同学们在写作中仍然需要关注小作文中的逻辑一致性，尽量避免将趋势和对比融在一起写。大作文题目是一道老题(20230621原题重现)，同时和2023年6月7号考试题目非常类似，但是注意在第一问中限定条件young 不复存在而第二问中出现了限定条件society：如果这些点没有体现在写作中，那么最终作文是不合格的。
Task 1
题型柱图
题目
The charts below show the precentage of males and females who were overweight in Australia between 1980 and 2023.
Task 2
题型复合话题—社会媒体类—工作与生活
题目An increasing number of people are changing careers during their working life.
What are the reasons for this? Does it have a positive or negative development for society?
参考范文Relatively frequent change of job and career in youngsters is becoming increasingly common. There are several reasons to explain this trend, and generally I believe the society would benefit from it.
The reason of this development is not complicated: information is becoming more accessible, actionable, and leverage-able than ever before. In the past, if one were to switch jobs, they would have to search job openings in the newspaper, print out a resume, write a cover letter, and then mail them to a potential interview. This process can and will be repetitive, for there is no grantee that job hunting can always be as smooth as one may assume. Such endeavor, most of which will be in void, can cause great pain for every job hunter, especially those who have a family and personal life to manage. In the modern era, however, such hassle does not exist anymore due to the fundamental shift of information actionability—we can now find hundreds and thousands of job openings on the internet at a click of a button, not to mention the growing number of headhunters.
Associated with this trend, the society would tend to be more fair, reasonable and dynamic: without being stuck with jobs, tasks, and daily routine, an individual can surely create things where one’s true passion is about, and therefore fill one’s life with joy. In fact, such change would eventually forge a society where the majority of general public can truly enjoy their lives. Some, however, would argue that a frequent change would create a sense of uncertainty, but one should also fully appreciate that the ultimate purpose of society is to ensure a life with pleasure for everyone, which is not going to happen if general public is forced doing things they do not like.
Overall, although some believe changing jobs or careers should not be frequent, I believe it is beneficial, as people can now truly grasp their life and future.
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