帮我看个英语短文，挑下毛病，谢谢~
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I am not very tall.I don\u2019t wear glass.I have black eyes and my hair is frizzly. I am an outgoing and lively girl.I hope we could be good friends!
I love dancing very much.I always study it at the weekends.I like reading,too.I think reading is very interesting.I am good at Art and Music.So I like drawing and listening to music,but I don\u2019t do well in Maths.
everyone is very pleased to spend three years of junior secondary school life. I am looking forward to the future and we've gone through life, hoping to a better understanding as we, together with all progress, share fun, grow together. We're going to fuel toward our goal!
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Firstly, even with field experience and an awareness of global issues, expatriates could focus better with helping localize a company, an approach that has been used by multinationals as an effective measure to handle national and regional obstacles by their local knowledge whereas frequent flyers have considered global connections through a macroeconomic lens. In contrast, virtual managers do not usually have the understanding of multi-cultural issues and can\u2019t properly deal with various issues in a timely manner.
Mrs Xu is good at teaching. Her classes are very funny. I enjoy having her classes and I can learn a lot. (To去掉) tell you the truth, Mrs Xu likes singing and She can sing English songs very well. Mrs Xu likes kicking shuttlecock(踢毽子), too. During the class break, she often teaches us English songs or plays game with us.
Mrs Xu is just like our friends. We all like her. Then what about your favourite teacher?
写的很好，只有两处错误。已经改正过来。大写字母
好什么，外国人叫老师哪有用Mrs，结了婚也是用Miss。
1.“She is thirty-eight years old but she looks very yong”可以写成
she looks very young though she is thirty-eight years old
2. I enjoy having her classes because the atmosphere(气氛) is good and I can learn a lot.
3.During the class break---After class.
looks very young
To tell(you) the truth you删除
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