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2.had
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3.does
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4.walks
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有不少错误啊~不过为了尊重你原本的意思，我没给你改内容，只是纠正语法和逻辑错误哦
还有，感觉那位把你的文章删的好狠。。。总之语法就这样差不多啦~~
1.Local dog attacked the duckling, Little girl brokenhearted
local和little前都应该加冠词a，duckling前也应加a而不是the，brokenhearted是形容词，前面应该有was。
2.A duckling was attacked by a local dog Jackie and died very soon after。This ducking belongs to a local girl called Adeline
jackie前应该加一个named，而且这句话太罗嗦，改成定语从句吧，A duckling which belonged to a local girl called Adeline was attacked by a local dog named Jackie.
3.she loves the duckling so much that she had spend most of her time with the duckling
had去掉，这只是在叙述过去的事，不要用过去完成时。整篇文章是过去时，loves和belongs好像不对。
4.therefore she named the duckling PLT stand for precious little treasure.
stand改成standing，是非谓语动词
5.Unfortunately the duckling was killed by dog Jackie
dog前加THE，JACKIE去掉
6.But that’s not all; Adeline’s father caused PLT’s death because he wants to test dogs obedient.
这句话表达的不对，最好改成The reason for PLT'death was that Adeline's father just wanted to test the dog's obedient.
7.After the innocent duckling had been killed, little girl Adeline was brokenhearted. She helped PLT to hold a funeral with her third brother Gregory.
innocent换成poor，little girl去掉，后面改成Adeline was brokenhearted and hold a funeral for PLT with her third brother Gregory.
8.From this event, we have carried on a series of investigations on 20 pedestrians
have去掉。
9.96% of pedestrians say that it is fathers fault， he should know want is going to happen before he act it, and he should cares about Adeline’s felling.
改成that Adeline'father was erring because he should think what would happen before he did it and he should cared about Adeline's feeling.
10.because this is such a giant hit for a kid like Adeline’s age
like改成in.
11.and if it’s an animal that’s wake then they own from the external, they will try to attack or demo the animal to show their status.
把and去掉,其实你这句话的意思我不太明白诶~逻辑有点混乱啊，告诉我你想表达什么，我再帮你改吧。
12.From this event we also had an interview with third brother Gregory
third brother去掉，有点罗嗦
13.because he attended PLT’s funeral.
这句与前一句不构成因果啦，去掉because
14.He mentioned sympathy with Adeline, she cried so hard during the funeral.
这句与上一句一起改成He attended PLT's funeral and expressed sympathy to Adeline because she cried so hard during the funeral.
15.And he thinks a part form that is him faults, because he accidentally picked PLT out of seven ducklings.
最好改成Gregory thought that he also had fault because it was he who accidentally picked PLT out of seven ducklings. 用一个强调句~
雏鸭风暴
本地狗袭击了丑小鸭，小女孩伤心的。
阿丑小鸭袭击了当地的狗成龙死亡后不久。这回避属于一个名为爱德玲当地姑娘，她爱的丑小鸭，以至于她已经花了她与丑小鸭的大部分时间，因此她命名为宝贵财富小雏鸭PLT的立场。
不幸的是，鸭狗杀死了成龙，
但是这还不是全部;爱德玲的父亲引起血小板的死是因为他想测试狗听话。
雏鸭后，无辜的被杀害，小女孩的伤心阿德琳。她帮助血小板将与她的第三个兄弟格雷戈里葬礼。
调查：
从这一事件，我们已进行调查，研究20行人系列。
96％的行人说，这是父亲的错，他应该知道想要的是将要发生之前，他的行为来，他应该对爱德玲的砍伐关心。和心理学说过，这可以作为儿童的不平衡情绪或自闭症，因为这是这样一个像爱德玲的年龄孩子大打击。
4％的行人说，这也是狗的错，狗应该有他一定的自我控制。但动物学家提到，整个动物无法抗拒诱惑的新事物，如果它是一个动物的后，然后他们自己从外部，他们将试图攻击或演示动物显示他们的状态。
采访格雷戈里：
从这一事件，我们也有一个与第三兄弟格雷戈里采访，因为他参加了专利法条约的葬礼。他提到的阿德琳同情，所以她哭了，在葬礼努力。他认为，部分形式，他的错误，因为他意外地挑选了7雏鸭血小板了。
Local dog attacked the duckling, Little girl brokenhearted.
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这个题名好啰嗦 而且用的也不对 2个句子之间至少有个连词 比如AND， SO等等 而且LITTHE GIRL 前要加个A
A duckling was attacked by a local dog Jackie and died very soon after.
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开头最好介绍下时间地点 比如 IN **CITY 等等
A duckling was attacked by a local dog Jackie and died very soon after. This ducking belongs to a local girl called Adeline;
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这句话很罗嗦 建议用个定于从句 THE duckling WHICH called Adeline AND belongED to a local girl was attacked by a DOG 去掉狗前面的 local
she loves the duckling so much that she had spend most of her time with the duckling , therefore she named the duckling PLT stand for precious little treasure.
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这句话有点小奇怪 而且和上文联系不是很紧密 整个事件还没有怎么介绍 辟谷为什么狗会袭击它 怎么袭击的它 都没有讲 突然转到小女孩的感情身上 感觉缺乏逻辑 和内容
Unfortunately the duckling was killed by dog Jackie,
But that’s not all; Adeline’s father caused PLT’s death because he wants to test dogs obedient.
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第一句去掉前文提过了
第二句好奇怪的用法 caused可以这样用吗 爸爸并不是鸭子死的直接原因吧
IT IS UNFORTUNATELY THAT WAY THE DOG COULD ATTACKED THE DARK IS BECAUSE THE GIRL 'FATHER WANT TO TEST THE DOG~
After the innocent duckling had been killed, little girl Adeline was brokenhearted. She helped PLT to hold a funeral with her third brother Gregory.
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innocent去掉 这是形容人的 不要用helped鸭子已经死了啊 用GAVE 比较合适
96% of pedestrians say that it is fathers fault，
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前面加个ABOUT FAULT 好奇怪建议换词 ACTTION WRONG
he should know want is going to happen before he act it, and he should cares about Adeline’s felling.
=========================================HE是谁 歧义~要点名是那个女孩的爸爸
ACT 换成DID 而且这个句子都要换成过去时
And a psychology mentioned that this could form children’s Imbalance Mood or Autism, because this is such a giant hit for a kid like Adeline’s age.
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这个感觉扯得有点远 非常、缺乏逻辑 建议全部删除 在这里只要说人们都比较同情这个小女孩 而且建议家长注意狗的行为就够了
4% of pedestrians say that it’s also dog’s fault, the dog should have a certain control of him self. But a zoologist mentioned that the entire animal can’t resist temptation of new things, and if it’s an animal that’s wake then they own from the external, they will try to attack or demo the animal to show their status.
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这一段真的是太假了 没有人会怪狗 狗咬鸭子是正常的天性
And he thinks a part form that is him faults, because he accidentally picked PLT out of seven ducklings.
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这一段有点不是很好~~~ 感觉又啰嗦了 让他表达次啊同情完后再说希望妹妹能快点振作就可以了
He mentioned sympathy with Adeline, she cried so hard during the funeral.
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2个句子之间如果是逗号必须要加连词 ~！
she cried 改成WHO CRIED 去掉逗号
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总体来说你这篇文章选材不是特别的好 我觉得这个事情非常的明白 不用搞什么调查或者采访 应该选点有争议性的 比如学校到底应不应该让学生自己选课这类的
词汇量还可以 但是有的用词不是特别准确 还有些语法错误
如果你还是初中生 可以表扬下 如果是高中生就需要再补补语法了
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