雅思写作大作文高分范文：如何让人们外出更有安全感 英语作文范文英语学习方法
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In China, there are millions of people learning English which is regarded as the most frequent use language in the world. Indeed, there are many English spoken countries and most of international organizations use English as the standard language. Therefore, it's important for us to learn English well if we want to be a global man. But many people claim that it's hard to learn English well and they do not know what to do when they come to difficulties\u3002Today, I want to introduce some good ways for English learning.
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Firstly, fall in love with English. There is a good saying that interest is the best teacher. As long as you love something, we would like to figure it out deeply. So does English. Once you development your interest in English, you definitely will want to learn it by heart no matter how many difficulties you meet. Your interest is the biggest motivation to learn, which will force you to find some effective ways to learn.
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Secondly, make a good plan for your study and practice it strictly. Learning is a long and tough journey that needs patience as well as methods. A good plan is one of the most effective methods. Learning schedule, content, step, target and so on are included in a plan. Besides, you should pay attention to the mistakes you make. In your plan, you should set sometime aside to correct the mistakes you make and make sure that you would never make such mistakes again.
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Finally, make good use of all materials you can get. Nowadays, there are plenty of materials for us to learn English, such as newspaper, magazine, radio, TV, the internet and many other media. They contain almost all information in the world. We can get news as well as knowledge when we use them. Besides, the knowledge we get in the class is far more enough, so that it's necessary for us to broaden our knowledge after class by using various learning materials.
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分析：此题虽然看起来像是一道关于社会生活类的新题，但在写作中，依然可以把我们平时练过的关于犯罪类、电视暴力和电子设备利弊的素材运用到此文中。
文章结构：4段
首段：导入话题，概述主题
主体段1：导致人们缺乏安全感的原因一
主体段2：导致人们缺乏安全感的原因二
主体段3：能够让人们感到安全的措施
结尾段：总结上文
雅思写作参考范文
Security is always a frequently talked topic in the modern society. Looking into the factors leading to dangers helps people to protect themselves from insecurity. This essay will mainly analyze the reasons for this problem and provide some solutions.
在现代社会中，安全问题一直是人们经常谈论的话题。探究导致危险的因素有助于人们保护自己不受不安全感的影响。本文主要分析了造成这一问题的原因，并提出了解决的办法。
There are two main factors contributing to the phenomenon that more people feel insecure. In general, the detailed description of violence on the mass media should be responsible for this problem. When criminal cases such as shooting, theft and driving after drinking are often reported on the TV, the viewers’ safety and security will probably be threatened and they will be in the belief that they are likely to subject to offenses at anytime. This problem can also be attributed to the widespread use of mobile devices. With more applications installed in people’s smart phones, they save too many secrets on this device--the online bank passwords and the information of their social network which may include significant business opportunities. It is not exaggerated that their lives and property will be threatened if they lose their precious mobile devices.
造成这种现象的主要原因有两个：更多的人感到不安全。一般来说，对大众媒体上的暴力行为的详细描述应该对这个问题负责。在电视上经常报道射击、盗窃和酒后驾车等刑事案件，观众的安全与安全可能受到威胁，他们相信自己随时都可能受到冒犯。这个问题也可以归因于移动设备的广泛使用。随着越来越多的应用安装在人们的智能手机上，他们在这个设备上保存了太多的秘密——网上银行的密码和他们的社交网络的信息，其中可能包含了大量的商业机会。如果他们失去了宝贵的移动设备，他们的生命和财产将受到威胁，这是不夸张的。
To solve this problem, governments, police stations and citizens themselves should cooperate with each other. First of all, the government should impose a restriction on the representation of crimes, reducing the plots focusing on the detailed description. The governments and police stations needs to set up a security system, through which citizens’ personal information can be prevented from being stolen. It is also of great essence that citizens should raise the awareness of security.
为了解决这个问题，政府、警察局和公民本身应该相互合作。首先，政府应该对犯罪的表现施加限制，减少对细节描述的关注。政府和警察局需要建立一个安全系统，通过这个系统，公民的个人信息可以被防止被窃取。公民应该提高对安全的认识，这也是很重要的。
As mentioned above, the occurrence of crime on the mass media and the storage of personal information on mobile devices are the main reasons for insecurity. Governments, police stations and citizens should make a concerted effort to address this issue.
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