请大神帮忙修正这篇作文中的语法错误 请大佬们帮忙看一下这篇作文，那里有语法错误，如何改正
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I agree 【with the statement that】 “people in their right mind never take pride in their talents，” 【because if a man becomes too proud, he will achieve less than what he could have achieved.】 【This kind of aphorism warning】people 【about becoming too proud exists】 in all 【cultures】. 【There】 is a general idea that people should not take 【too much pride in their success】 even though they 【might actually】 have some talents.
In ancient China, there 【once】 was a child who was 【named】 genius by all 【the】 other citizens, 【because he could】 write poetry 【at the age of seven】. His father was really 【proud】 of his son, and 【took】 him all over the country to show 【others】 his talent. 【However, because of this, 】the child 【did not】 want to continue 【his studies any longer】. His name in the history books is simply】 “genius boy”, 【and nothing was ever】 recorded about him after he was 12 years old. In Chinese history, 【hundreds of talented boys were noted】, but only a few of them 【achieved success】 in 【politics，literature，or science.】 【For most of them，】the only things of them recorded in the history book were 【stories】 about their 【childhoods】.
The other reason why people should not take 【too much pride in】 their 【talents and successes】 is 【that】 pride will make them 【more likely to】 look down on others. 【To be jealous of men who lead a better life or have more talent is】 human nature. 【Throughout history，there were often geniuses who】 were 【persecuted】 by others even 【though】 there was no 【record】 of 【there having been people】 who did not respect them. 【The conclusion is that if】 the genius take 【too much pride in their talents】 and 【treats others with contempt,】 they 【are】 more likely to be treated badly, 【and others might refuse to help him.】 Few things can be done with only one genius.
To 【be】 modest does not 【necessarily mean one must have low self-confidence】; a man who does not 【believe in】 himself will not be able to【accomplish anything great，as】 self confidence is 【just】 as important as 【modesty】. The hard thing is to find the balance between enough confidences and proud, genius need to be careful didn’t get too much in each side.
To be concluded, People in their right mind never take pride in their talents is a truth; only by obeying this rule can the genius keep their talent and success in life. This is also for parents, that they should not make their genius children become proud, for example, by flaunt their talents to all friends, it will the child look down other children.
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I agree with their correct heart will never be proud of their potential. Because if a become a proud man he would get less success. It is an error to tell people to be proud of all of culture in the fable exist. This is a general understanding that people should not take pride, even if they did have a number of literary talent.
At the age of 7 in ancient China because he has the ability to write poetry, he'll be a title called the genius. His father was his son and he gave his to make children in all parts of the country continue to not want to accept pride. His name in history is just a "genius kid" after his 12-year-old, is recorded about him. In Chinese history there are literally hundreds of talented boy records, but only a few people have some real success in the political, literary or scientific. They are recorded in the history books of unique, but instead about their childhood stories.
Why people should not be their pride, because you can be proud, will make them look down on others. This is jealous of people have a better life or talent is a kind of human nature. Some genius persecuted even has no record of not respecting them. Therefore, if the genius proud of and contempt for others, they are more vulnerable to abuse or even other people just refused to help him, only a genius can do something.
To moderate does not mean that there are a few thinks himself; one does not believe that their people will have any great self-confidence is modest. Difficult thing was to find an adequate balance between egoism and pride, genius to be careful not to get too much on each side.
You can complete them right in the heart of man, never, Director of the pride; but this rule can maintain their genius of talent and success in life. This is also for parents, they should not become a proud example of their gifted children's show off their talents to all my friends, it will be watching the children's eyes.
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