英语短文改错（共10处错误） 英语，短文改错10处错误，，高中
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I live on an island near Africa（1）.It is the only home of （2）red colobus monkeys but there （3）are few left.I think it is time that we （4）should take some measures to save them.This is my plan （5）on how to save the monkeys.First,I suggest making a （6）special park for them.We should protect them （7）and see whether they need more food or （8）medicine.Second,I hope that you can offer our local government some money that can protect the monkeys （9）much better.Please help the poor monkeys（10）.I'm sure that they will survive with your help.（1）逗号不能连接完整的两句话。
（2）泛指这种猴子，不能用the加单数。
（3）表示现在的状态要用are不是were。
（4）it is time that 句型表示“是该。。。的时候了”时，后面的从句要用主语加should do 结构。
（5）关于什么的计划要用介词on
（6）要用形容词special来修饰名词park
（7）保护猴子和看他们是否需要食物药物两者的关系不是任选其一而是并列并带有递进的意思，所以用and不是or。
（8）medicine是不可使名词不可以加s。
（9）better已经是比较级不可以用more修饰。可以直接去掉或者换成much。
（10）最后两句话一个是祈使句一个是陈述句而且主语不同一般不用and连接，改成单独的两句话。
正好改了10处 希望能帮到你~
I live on an island near Africa, (which) is the only home (to) the red colobus monkey but there (are) few left. I think it is time that we take some measures to save them. This is my plan (加入about) how to save the monkeys. First, I suggest making a (special) park for them. We should protect them (and) see whether they need more food or (medicine). Second, I hope that you can offer our local government some money that (去掉is) can protect the monkeys (去掉more 或改成much) better. Please help the poor monkeys and I'm sure that they will survive (with) your help.
..小妹妹 - -。不给分还要做题。。 哎。
我看看，简单我就指出几个
第一排 live in colobus monkeys
suggest to make
第四排 foods
that can protect the
they will be survived
我只看到六个 - -。太久没接触这些初中的东西了。。忘记了不少。。
I live on an island near Africa,it is the only home of the red colobus monkey but there were few left.I think it is time that we take some measures to save them.This is my plan how to save the monkeys.First,I suggest making a specially park for them.We should protect them or see whether they need more food or medicines.Second,I hope that you can offer our local government some money that is can protect the monkeys more better.Please help the poor monkeys and I'm sure that they will survive under your help.
拜托，这根本不是一道题目吧，哪有考试题目出得这么不严谨的。根本就是一篇作文嘛，还限定10处错误。。。老实说，要从语法角度看，未必有那么多错，可要从写作技巧说，可改的地方远不止10个。但是要改好就成了帮你写作文了，不给分咋行？
附带说一句，楼上的不要误导，你改的几个多数是没错的，特别是SURVIVE，为什么用被动呢？
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