帮忙修改一篇英语作文（希望你能认真的修改一下 ，指出其中的错误，最好你能给出你的意见）
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2.and heated debates are right on their way. （建议你把这句话单拿出来，改为Heated debates are....不要在并列了.）
3.food were found(found用词不合适改为created较好）
4.I believe that many people have a consensus that when we find a delicious food we can not refuse it even thought we are feel very full .（这句有点坠，改一下I believe there is a consensus that we still can't refuse a taste of delicious food even with our stomach full.)
5. it is commonly acknowledged that eat too much does harm to us ，it easy to lead to fat and some diseases. (句中eat 改为eating，而后面可已改为一个which 引导的非限定性定语从句。整句该为 it is commonly acknowledged that eating too much does harm to us , which easily leads to fatness and some diseases. )
6. if you find a good food you can drink water (这句话不好food不可数用find也不合适，改为if you are addicted to some kind of food 译为如果你吃某种食物上瘾，而后面改为you can drink water instead of eating)
7.appetite for 用to不太好
8.you can tell you (you 改为yourself)
9. I must lost weight (lost改为lose)
10. do not eat food of high quantity of heat (do not 改为avoid eating food of high quantity of heat)
11.you should know that food is bad for you and what is good for you . if you know you are able to resist the temptation to eating .是不是把what写成food了还是food 前有what？呵呵而且两句之间并没有因果关系啊，如果能抵制食欲就能知道什么食物是有益的什么是有害的了？最后分开说就好了，因为你写的是How to resist the temptation to eating 最后就说By the steps above you will surely be able to resist the temptation to eat.)
长舒一口气，希望对你有帮助。
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