找语法错误，一个给10分
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but self-confidence , I think ,is the most important one \uff08dependent\uff09
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Currently
Generally speaking
On the contrary
Understandably
As a result
In a word
However
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For
And
Nor
But
Or
Yet
So
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中的public 改成the public或者public people
第一段第二行的topic写错了。
第一段倒数第二句的attitude应该改成复数。
第一段中Personally, the status of teacher is indisputable,which is base on educational and mental aspects.
最好改为
Personally, the status of teacher is indisputable,a conclusion which is base on educational and mental aspects.
第二段中
the shortage of machine is that they can't educated students according to their different abilities中的shortage是缺乏短缺的意思，你要表示缺点可以用disadvantage,defect,deficiency,shortcoming等等。另外你写the shortage of machine,后面有说they cannot educated students，首先前面machine应该加s, 否则后面就不应该用they,两者要一致，另外cannot不能缩写，还有是cannot educate不是educated.
后面的in spite of 后面只能加名词，不能加句子。你可以用although, even though或者是in spite of the fact that.....
by the right of advanced technology是什么意思？
mending project with the feedback不好，改成improving the teaching level by the feedback,后面那个apparently改成apparent
expericial是虾米意思？没这个词。要表示有经验的用experienced.
repectively写错了，应该是respectively.
enhance their studing competition,没有这种用法，可以写enhance their academic ability.
第三段more over 连着写。
students mental healty 改成students' mental health
teachers'another benefit, 不是老师的好处，这句话不对，应该是老师的优势。改成teachers' another advantage/virtue/merit.
we can't ignored,can后面用原型啊。
If computers displace teachers teaching kids in classrooms,which will cause kids have less time to communicate with the elders.整体错误，这句话没有主谓宾。if引导的状语从句后面有接一个定语从句，没有主干，应该改成If computers displace teachers teaching kids in classroom,kids will have less time to communicate with the elders.
even suffered from serious mental disease改成suffering.句型是sb suffers sth.
最后一句We can't emphasize the significance of educators too much.
用法不地道。应该这么用 the significance of educators cannot be overemphasized.
回答完毕。
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