15分的英语作文出现这样的语法错误还有10分吗
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l like a person who is named Vae
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The past, the first such serious like a will probably forever remains a stranger.
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perhaps, you will be of the feelings of contempt, an infidel.\u4e5f\u8bb8\uff0c\u4f60\u4eec\u4f1a\u5bf9\u6211\u7684\u8fd9\u79cd\u611f\u60c5\u55e4\u4e4b\u4ee5\u9f3b\uff0c\u4e0d\u5c51\u4e00\u987e\u3002
But,i really like Vae.
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Becausehe is so fond of his song,and because he is more like his songs. i think it will continue, i believe!
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No commercial positioning and packing, the team has announced plans and vae independence. they do is so simple
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Vae has said, a song. even a memory one day there was no man to hear of my song, i have one last fans, vae.
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But, i'd like to say, i would like him very long time, and perhaps future one day, i'll forget him, but at least, i don't want to give up. don't want to leave. vae - the only love you!
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i had a unforgettable experience
i heard some one walking
i cried, because i was so fearful.
when i can't hear the walking sound.....
i stop crying and started to watch tv......
i was more frightened than before....
my parents didn't back home until 11pm
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另，正确的表达应该是 who studies。
希望可以帮到你 谢谢
有的。一处错误扣不了5分。
可是我还有个词性错误 本来是confidence给写成confident了…
有，不过会减2.3分，最主要的是字迹工整，这样分数就不会太低
有啊，不过老师改的严就没有了
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