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首先我想旅行的是冰岛。人们说冰岛是火和冰状，因为它有200多个火山并有许多冰川形成该国的景观。在冰岛上覆盖着冰雪，但也有许多热点之间的雪和冰泉。在冰岛，风景是如此纯净，独特的，它使人们感到放松。下一个国家，我想的是瑞士旅游。这个国家拥有最好的巧克力生产和手表的生产。在瑞士，土地面积和人口少，但生活质量高。其他地方我要旅行是巴塞罗那，一个美丽的海边西班牙城市。但是，最有吸引力的事情，我是辉煌的建筑物由安东尼高迪，一个伟大的天才设计师设计的
The Iceland is the first place I want to travel to .there are more than 200 volcanoes and many glaciers form it's landscape, so people said it is shaped by fire and ice.It is covered with snow and ice which have many hot springs inside.In Iceland, the scenery is so pure and unique which makes people feel relax.
The second place is the Switzerland . This country has the best chocolate production and watch production. She has small Land area and population but high quality life .
There are so many places I want to travel include Barcelona,a beautiful Spanish city near the sea, especially to it's splendor building which designed by Antoni Gaudi, a architect with great talent.
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The Iceland is the first place I want to travel to .there are more than 200 volcanoes and many glaciers form it's landscape, so people said it is shaped by fire and ice.It is covered with snow and ice which have many hot springs inside.In Iceland, the scenery is so pure and unique which makes people feel relax.
The second place is the Switzerland . This country has the best chocolate production and watch production. She has small Land area and population but high quality life .
There are so many places I want to travel include Barcelona,a beautiful Spanish city near the sea, especially to it's splendor building which designed by Antoni Gaudi, a architect with great talent. 别举报我啊求！！！！！！
The first place I want to travel to is Iceland. People said Iceland is shaped by fire and ice, because it has more than 200 volcanoes and many glaciers form the country’s landscape. The Iceland is covered with snow and ice but there are many hot springs among the snow and ice. In Iceland, the scenery is so pure and unique, it makes people feel relax. The next country I want to travel to is Switzerland. This country has the best chocolate production and watch production. In Switzerland , the Land area and population is small but the quality of life is high. The other place I want to travel is Barcelona, a beautiful Spanish city near the sea. But the most attractive thing to me is the splendor building which designed by Antoni Gaudi, a architect with great talent.
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